Eloquence - Comments

Wow, this is crazy, I swear at the moment, and for a while now, this is the only story that keeps me coming back. I subscribed a while back when this story first started and then forgot about it for a bit, then I came back and it's like relationship I can't get over. This is my favorite story and I find it excellent and brilliant. So, please update soon!

Oh, the pains of sexual frustration!
unfff, what I wouldn't give to have an opportunity like that with Andrew (;

oh my god.
i love this story way too much!
i seriously check back everyday to see if you updated.
i want andrew and jordan to be together so bad!!
i CANNOT wait for more.

update please!

I loved the update! I love how innocent Jordan is! And Andrew trying to play off his feelings because he really likes her is cute too :)
Update soon please!!!

i luved the update!
update soon!!

that's right guurl.
you make him wait. :)

YES UPDATE!!!!!
I love this story :)
I think Jordan is such an easy character to relate and connect with, even if you don't have family problems at home or an older boyfriend who obviously wants more than you can give. I love how she didn't lose her on goals and values because of a guy, even though she did change a bit.

This truly is one of my favorite stories! Please update soon :)

I wish you'd update more. I hate rereading chapters because I can't remember what's going on! Though I do love Jordan's innocence, girls I knew were already sluting it up back then.

Fucking LOVE this story.

Good gosh. It's like you read my mind everytime you update, I thought the previous day, "well I wish she would update this story, but I won't bother her about it." Mind reader! I loved this. I'm glad Jordan totally cockblocked Andrew. It made me happy.

I just blew off 30 minutes of mid term studying to read the last updated chapters and i don't at all regret it.this is getting too good,please update soon!

I love this story. Update!

Aw, poor Andrew! :/

I loveth this! More please!

update?

What is going to haapppppeeeeennnn?! D:
UPDATE PLEASEEEE :)

i'm dying to know what happens next! please update?

I love how real this story is. no generic sappy "love at first sight, they live happily ever after".
amazing job!
and thaaanks. I'm almost in love with fictional character. -__- ;) andrew's such a sweetheart!