Let Me Shake Up Your World - Comments

So many amazing updates.
Im speechless.

Awesome chapters, this is getting even better

Fave part: Jack wanting to swim naked.
First, above all else
I would have slapped Maria too
Amnesia or not, that was kind of hoe-ish
Second, I love Bill. He just rocks.
and third, WTF PETE.
WTF.
lol MOOOOOAAAR [lion like roar]

:O I like how I checked this yesterday and there's three new chapters up. :D
But at least Maria remembers now. That's good! But now Pete's being violent. D:
Noooooes!
More soon, yes? :)

It's not your fault touching beards is fun!

All I could think on that last line was:
No Chris, No!
I'd slap a hoe too, hitting a girl

<3

What a broseph!

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Update Soon bizatch!

yes.
It's not rape cos you asked, but its sexual harassment.
if you tell some one they have big boobs, that's sexual harassment.
Or if you tell them they're sexy.

<3

Update Soon.

I'm likeing all the updates. And I like Travis and all but I don't like that Maria cheated, even if she doesn't remeber her life

A little piece of me just died.

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yay for ginger sex!

When I see Travis, I wonder;
How long does it take him to do his hair?

aloha! shouldn't you be asleep missy? love the chapter. well, actually i dont, cuz shes fucking engaged, but glad you updated! can't wait to see what kind of trouble this sturs up! have a nice night!

D: I want Maria to remember Pete. And for Alex to not be her boyfriend. (the fuck? D:)
But I'm glad that you guys might be updating more often now! :D Nag her! I want more. :)

Whew, Kacey and the baby are okay, that's good. Pete bonding will his ill dad, cute. And what the fuck did Gaskarth do? Is he helping her remember and just lying to her to get what he wants! That fucker!

wow... poor pete... a lot is going on right now
I think that having this chapter in Pete's POV was great :)

It makes me sad that Maria doesn't know anything.
So sad that I might cry....
Let's hope that since you're out of school, you'll update more.

It makes me sad that Maria doesn't know anything.
So sad that I might cry....
Let's hope that since you're out of school, you'll update more.

great update... the pan was a very nice touch ;)

Aww.

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that dream brr .. it gave me the creeps :) I hope that Maria is okay, anyway I loved it ..