This, Is Getting Over You - Comments

This is awesome.

I'm going to subscribe now =]

very good story, gonna subscribe

WONDERFUL.

i love how it starts out with them hating each other, cause in most other stories the people always really like each other at first.

subscribing is what i am doing now.

BAM.

I really like this story.
I will be subscribing.
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It is really written well.
And I almost feel like I am there.

I can't wait for more.

Linsday_X
xoxo

This is amazingly well written. I'm already addicted to it. WEll done. *subscribes* I can't wait for more! Keep up the amazing work!

Thankyou for your really kind comment.

I didn't write the part with the music lyrics, but I think it's got to do with the fact she said she was listening to her Ipod, but then it does tie into the story.

I'm also glad to hear about your reaction to the first chapter, and in my opinion thats exactly what we wanted to achieve.

More is coming very soon!

I am not one to leave comments that actually tell you what the world you did that was so awesome. But I think I should this time.

My favorite part was this one

Staring back at me was a young woman, around twenty-four. A mass of messy black hair contrasted with the ghostly white of her skin as a pair of icy blue eyes stared out from underneath the stray locks of her fringe, mascara and eyeliner severely smudged from the long and tiring journey she’d travelled. Her tiny built body was limp and exhausted and there was a coffee stain on her white t-shirt.

At first I didn’t understand the third person change, but then I loved how she looked in the mirror and described herself, I don’t really know why, but I do. I loved the use of song lyrics throught the first chapter. It didn’t make a lot of sense, but I think it will tie in later according to the Prologue, which by the way made me want to cry. I wanted to fly into the story and take the gun away from her.

So this is me subscribing and hoping you update this soon.

I love it.

XoOX,
Amanda C.

your right i do like this more when u can!

OhMyGosh.
Nicely donneee...
I wonder who ran into her... O.O
More soon? *grins*

Child_of_Sin:

ooooh great update!!!!!!!
can you tell me when you update again please

Sure. (: It will be soon.

ooooh great update!!!!!!!
can you tell me when you update again please

Kiss.Me.Goodbye:

Vegemite is a real Australian delicacy. It's made from a concentrated yeast estract and is amazingly strong and horrible tasting for anyone who hasn't been brought up on it. Which is why most foreigners complain about how disgusting vegemite is. I like the taste personally. And it's one of the best sources for Vitamin B..I think it's B..?

Idk. I think it tastes like a bag of salt. (:

Vegemite is a real Australian delicacy. It's made from a concentrated yeast estract and is amazingly strong and horrible tasting for anyone who hasn't been brought up on it. Which is why most foreigners complain about how disgusting vegemite is. I like the taste personally. And it's one of the best sources for Vitamin B..I think it's B..?

Wow, this sotry is awesome!! I love how you two write!!!

more soon??

what does vegemite taste like???

xoxo

wow!
i really liked this start to the story, you're such a great writer, i could effortlessly imagine the emotions of the person during their internal struggle.
i'm intrigued as to how this person got to the state they are in now, what did this man do to him/her?

hehe, the band is called Hella!! That's awesome :P

good story!!!
more soon??

Wow... o.O
*is in love*
I think you should keep writing it...*grins*
More ASAP, I demand it! xD