Our Hearts Begin to Crumble. - Comments

Jw, are you, ya know, maybe probably ever gonna update? Or is it a definite no. Cause you can KINDA find out what happens by reading Hemorrhage, which is awesome! :D Big time, its like a cross over. (: and you know that Kennedy and Molly work things out...you just don't know how.

I'm in lovewith this story..it's freaking awesome!!!!! i love your writing style and it's just amazing =]

i just found this story, no joke.
i read the prequel and it made me sad.
but it was amazing!
i love kennedy! :D hahah.
but now i wish you could update it :( hahaha.

I miss this story :)

I cannot wait for this to be updated again :)
I love this story soo much!

I absolutely LOVE this story! Can't wait til you update!

I wonder how many other people have already said it?
Does it matter, no, not really.
Garrett, really. Something should go down with Molly & Garrett.
I would die from the preciousness.

I can honestly say, that I love this story, both this one, and Hey, Darling.
I am not going to lie, though.
It took me about a solid five minutes to figure out why Emelie and the John situation seemed so familiar.
Another five, to put two and two together.
And then I just thoroughly enjoyed the rest of the latest update, feeling sort of smart! :)

you should update this story =)

School...is time consuming :D

So I finally got around to reading the latest update. (I know, took me long enough).
But as I said, it's always worth the wait because whatever you write is like gold.
Never ceases to amaze me time and time again.
Garrett's absolutely hilarious in this. I kept cracking up, especially when he bursted out singing that Millionaires song. Oh man, that's priceless :')
Your descriptions are wonderful - not overdone or too little. Plus, I absolutely adore Molly's character. (:
She's always been a favorite of mine because she's not perfect and has flaws and that's okay.
+ Since in Hemorrhage it says that Molly will be their merch girl, I'm curious to see what will happen when they're at Warped.
Keep it coming (:
<33

fast updates, slow updates, they're all the same to me.
I love this story too much to be pissed at you :] xox

okok, myabe im too slow or something...
but i just get that your 2 stories are related *---*
and when i realized i started to scream hhahahaha XD
omg! i wouldn't want to go to warped if i was Molly D:!
see Kennedy everyday?
ohh noo..
I LOVE THIS!

You know what? Whenever you do get the time to update, I know it's going to be beyond amazing. So, she doesn't want to go on Warped and doesn't want people to press to find out why. I really loved the comparison of Emilie to a china doll, that was beautiful. I really enjoyed the chapter, even though Kennedy is still anoying the socks out of me.

Holy crap. Maybe I'm just slow not picking this up earlier, but woah! I just realized this story and your other story tie together. Maybe it's your other story I dont really know who the author is but wow.
I love how you did that. It's so incredibly unique. I've never seen anyone on mibba ever fo that.
you Neeeeeed to tell everyone about the other story cause it's like the same story but different points of view, yet at the same time different story lines.
Anyways I love that you tied them together that was awesome.

ahhh that was so good

Holyyylkfdsjlgkjdsh.
I saw Emelie's part in this, and knowing her from your other story...my jaw dropped a bit.

I had to go back and re-read this so many times.
I can't believe it. It makes so much sense now. :cheese:

I love this story, and your writing.
If there's anything I can do to help you with getting a chapter out, let me know. :cute:

But honestly? You're one of my favourite authors.
I want to hit Kennedy for being such an asshole sometimes. :XD

still want to know exactly why John and Mia broke up...
Molly better go on tour!

Continue please!

When did we become black?