Our Hearts Begin to Crumble. - Comments

oooo, i loved that update a lot.
gotta love garrett.
<3

aw Garrett is such a sweetheart :)
I hope the talk doesn't turn into a mess D:
thank you so much for updating :)

I nodded. “Should I talk to him now--?”

“God no!” Garrett looked like he was having a seizure, he was shaking his head so hard. “He’s still upset. Give him some time, talk to him tomorrow. Just prepare yourself for it, okay? I’ll call him and tell him to meet you somewhere, just pick a place.”

Heh, you cracked me up just a little in this excerpt. Girl, you're on fire and your writing is absolutely amazing. I am so glad you don't rush things like other authors sometimes do, and it seriously adds to the story. I don't know what else to say except that I love Molly and Garrett's friendship. The guy is such a sweetheart. Loved it, =)

I love how you write this. Its really amazing. :)
And I'm glad that you haven't rushed the characters into making amends. It makes the story way more interesting.
Keep it up, dear! :)

I was glad to see this in my inbox!
Okay so Kennedy obviouslyyyyyy is still smitten with her, and she is soooooo not over him, and I love it. I also love Garrett, what a sweetheart. It's too bad he never got the girl. He deserves a good girlfriend.
So with Warped starting in a week, I wonder what's going to happen. Is she going to go with them? Don't tell me, I wanna be surprised. I just want you to know that's my guess hahaha.
Fantastic update. Distance really DOES make the heart grow fonder. Or I guess absence does, in this case lol.

Garrett is so nice :]

Kaylie, I love you for posting this.
I really feel for Molly, though. Poor girl is a mess. I can only imagine how confused K-man is.
And, let's see, why wouldn't I love this, because Garrett's in it!!!! Yayyyyyyy Garrett to the rescue.
(Yeah, I'm really sugar-high right now on massive amounts of organic lollipops and fat-free frozen yogurt, whatever, sorry lol)
Anyway. This was fantastic. I so can't wait 'till the next update. Do it sooooooooooonnnnnnnn. Bribes will be offered if necessary (:
Sorry this comment sucks. I loved the update <3

I'm glad Garrett told her to talk to Kennedy!
I cant wait to see how that conversation goes!

Garrett is a babe!

And I hope everything works out for Molly!

I demand french fries too. Just cause.

Well now I know something exciting is happening in Hemorrage.
I'm subscribed to both of the stories (:
This story and it's prequel are AMAZING.

Oh,my god.
It's crossing with Hemorrage<3
Woooow,two amazing stories (:

I really liked the first one and I'm really liking this one so far!
cant wait for more!

Bugger. My ipod cut it short. Second attempt haha.
I like her stubourness though, it's a nice mix with what appears to be Kennedys indifference at the beginning.
I'm also chuffed about the tie in with Hemmorage (sp is so wrong,right?) as you know how much I adore that.
It's just fantastic, basically. And now it's officially July I can't wait for more.
X

I've just finished all of 'Hey, Darling' and everything you've written of crumble and I think a WOW is in order. It's fantastic.
I adore Molly Epps! She's the right amount of everything; bar stubourness, maybe,

I love this story :)
I'm so glad I came across this ^^
Update soon, my comments will probably get more into the story :)

Just caught up on the whole story. LOVING THE SEQUEL:))))

Wow, I don't know what I was thinking. That wasn't even HALF of my comment I had for you.
KENNEDY BROCK, STOP BEING SUCH A DICK AND STOP BEING SO CUTE TOO.
Because I want to get mad at him for calling her out, but really, she DOES need to just talk to him and not scream at him. And plus, I love how she was like 'do you know anything' and he's like 'nope, sorry, i fail' and then is like OH FUCK WAIT 'actually, yes, i do have a brain, it's just always off around you 'cause i like to think with my dick instead since I AM ONE ANYWAY, BLAH'.
(Yes, that was how I saw those two lines happen, just so you know:P)
Okay, I think that's it.
Looooove you.

(Just so you know, at the beginning, it says that Molly was crying, not Mia).
SHIT.
I leave and you decide K-man wants to suddenly grow a pair and call her out!??!?!
Dude.
Firstly, I commend you greatly for the fucking awesomeness of your updating. And for the fact that they were both updated so soon after one another and then they connect! YAY!
But anyway.
Shiiiiiiitttttt. I'm glad you took this idea.
Because it rocks.
And poor Kennedy. He's just minding his own business, chilling at John's house (without him there, weird, but hey, THAT MEANS JOHN WAS GONE. WHICH MEANS HE WENT AFTER EMELIE!!!!! Or he best have, if you want Kennedy to not get beat down in Something, missy), and then BAM, Molly goes in and attacks. And I loved her rant, because you get to see her sister-ly side and all that. And I almost feel bad for Mia. Except, not really. Because I'm feelin' worse for Emelie. And John just needs to grow a pair and mack on Emelie already, too, even though that's the other story but I'm going to throw that in here anyway. Haha.
BUT YEAH. This was amazing. I love you. Update again soon. Okay? Okay <3

Curious. I am very, very curious about this story.
Excited, too. All kinds of excited. (:
Even though Kennedy was such a boy at the end of Hey, Darling, I admire the whole not-taking-it with Molly.
And, oh my, what is going on with Mia and John? I liked those two while they were functioning. ha.

Congrats on peaking much interest with this epic story.