im seriously am loving this so far. but can i just give a suggestion. you shouldn't ask people what they want to read because you can't please everybody you should listen to your gut show your imagination and what makes you happy put your heart a soul into it because if it has the emotion and sense of determination most people will want to read it and it will linger in there minds after they finish reading the story.
just a suggestion you don't have to listen just a helping hand (:
Dude, that's not cool. I mean, even after Alley says that Blaze is her brother, and Noah hugs Blaze, he gets jealous. But that's cute how they all layed down together! Aww! Like 1 big happy family!