I'm so sad that you stopped writing this :(
June 10th, 2014 at 12:39pm
This... is just freaking amazing.
I love everything about this story, from the plot, to the characters, to the dialog.
You seem to have Patrick down to a science, and this story is so real, it's almost scary. [Meaning if Fall Out Boy break up, I know who to blame! I kid (:]
I love Patrick in this. He's so stubborn, and childish, and he acts exactly how someone would be expected to act when being thrown in a situation like that. It's really refreshing to see such a well thought out and realistic character.
Rachel is also a great character, I like how she doesn't constantly let Patrick get his way and do what he wants, she puts her foot down and makes him grow up. It's very admirable to see something like that in a lead female role.
Your writing is very beautiful, and you should be proud of such an amazing talent.
This story is very enjoyable, and I cannot wait to see what you have in store of us.
(:
