A Hatred That Will Never Bloom Into Friendship - Comments

  • Smogle

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    ahh!! Suspenseful! Ur good at cliff hangers! I cant wait for the next update!
    July 1st, 2009 at 08:29pm
  • Cute_Sango07

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    I wonder what the curse could be...? Hmmm...*thinks*

    Great job by the way! ^_^
    July 1st, 2009 at 04:04am
  • Cute_Sango07

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    Poor Kimina! :(
    June 23rd, 2009 at 06:22pm
  • Cute_Sango07

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    I was so worried that Lloyd wouldn't make it. I thought he was dead. :(
    But he's alive....only in really bad shape.... =/
    You are doing an excellent job on this! Keep it up! :)
    June 20th, 2009 at 09:39pm
  • Smogle

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    Yay! they found him! :D Wonderful story!
    June 20th, 2009 at 07:11pm
  • Miss. Ridlin

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    DUN DUN DUUUUUUNNNN!
    heehee
    DRAMA!
    June 18th, 2009 at 11:30pm
  • Cute_Sango07

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    Good! ^_^ Great! Awesome!! Bwah.... :P Yeah, anyways...ummm is she like some kind of healing ninja, like Kabuto or something...? I kinda wish that she had a demon thing inside of her like Naruto or Gaara.....*shrugs* I don't know. But yeah, you're doing a wonderful job on this story. ^_^
    June 15th, 2009 at 05:09pm
  • Miss. Ridlin

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    I like this story so far! :D heehee~
    though the flashbacks are kinda not needed seeing as most are about what's in the same chapter, so it'd probably be better if you used something like, "and I thought of that time..." I know Naruto does that flashback thing alot but in writing it's just kinda awkward but you can use flashbacks if your talking about something that happened like 5 chapters ago! =] ... just a suggetion =]
    June 14th, 2009 at 04:15pm
  • mz_insomniatic

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    Really really interesting so far...
    I like it. Keep up the good work
    peace&love 8)
    June 11th, 2009 at 02:10am
  • Cute_Sango07

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    Kimina's not dead! ^_^ YAY! She had green chakra around her...? That's soooo cool!!! :) But yeah, good job!
    June 10th, 2009 at 12:03am
  • Cute_Sango07

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    Are you serious....They both died? Well that's dumb.......and I think that Kimina should get the courage and fight for a change....I was getting mad when she wouldn't help fight....Gah! But *sighs* oh well....

    Anyways, I really like your story! Can't wait for the next chapters! ^_^
    June 7th, 2009 at 09:58pm
  • Cute_Sango07

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    Oh my goodness! Is this supposed to be a kinda love story or something? I'm just wondering....but anyways, this is really good! ^_^ You're doing a wonderful job on this story! :)
    June 6th, 2009 at 08:23pm