I was so worried that Lloyd wouldn't make it. I thought he was dead. :( But he's alive....only in really bad shape.... =/ You are doing an excellent job on this! Keep it up! :)
Good! ^_^ Great! Awesome!! Bwah.... :P Yeah, anyways...ummm is she like some kind of healing ninja, like Kabuto or something...? I kinda wish that she had a demon thing inside of her like Naruto or Gaara.....*shrugs* I don't know. But yeah, you're doing a wonderful job on this story. ^_^
I like this story so far! :D heehee~ though the flashbacks are kinda not needed seeing as most are about what's in the same chapter, so it'd probably be better if you used something like, "and I thought of that time..." I know Naruto does that flashback thing alot but in writing it's just kinda awkward but you can use flashbacks if your talking about something that happened like 5 chapters ago! =] ... just a suggetion =]
Are you serious....They both died? Well that's dumb.......and I think that Kimina should get the courage and fight for a change....I was getting mad when she wouldn't help fight....Gah! But *sighs* oh well....
Anyways, I really like your story! Can't wait for the next chapters! ^_^
Oh my goodness! Is this supposed to be a kinda love story or something? I'm just wondering....but anyways, this is really good! ^_^ You're doing a wonderful job on this story! :)