Only Sweeter - Comments

i love this! its so good! i hope theres more somewhen?

Whoa! this is amazing! the chapters are long (which i enjoy) and i just love the way its written :)

This is really good, why dont you update??

^ Aw, cute, and thanks for the impatience. It means that we got to you ;)
but, y'know, next chapter is Erika's responsability, and if she needs her time, we have to wait. It will be worth it.
Trust me :tehe:

Oi update this story Bonnie!!! i miss it :)

I'm only going to say one word..

brilliant.

xoxo-
Frankie

I hate stopping in the middle of chapters and commenting, but you MUST know how much this made my day; he had roared, he had fucking roared.

That made me giggle like the teenage girl I am like you wouldn't believe. Just... WOW XD It's so amazing!!!

You know, it's funny. I actually licked my lips while reading chapter five. I have never done that in my life. That's awesome.

I don't know if you were aiming for it or not, but the end of chapter five was really cute. ^^

Oh my god, Apple! I'm so addicted to this, you have no idea! XP I've had to switch computers once because of time exceedments, but this story is SO amazing, you have no idea! I'm so proud that I know someone who can write this well, and have such a great style, and I'm sitting here glowing w/ happiness (my friends words not mine) and it's all because of you! XP

OH
MY
GOSH

I LOVE YOU

Hey guys!

Once again a-fucking-mazing update!!

that was ssoooooo hott.. i loved the indepth description and the way you expressed gerards emotions and thoughts..

cant wait for the next update

any ideas when that will be??..although i dont wanna rush you or anything

I love the tension. Update wicked soon!

This is the most sensual, erotic story I think I have ever read. The sexual tension between Gerard and Frank is almost unbearable. Can't wait for more!

OMFG..i love this story it is sooooooo fucking hott!!

you guys are imense writers..really its fucking brillant

Wow
I can't wait till your next update
=]

omg new reader and i luv this story!!
frankie is soo adroable and gee is like a freakin perv!! but i luv tht guy! xD
write more soonn!!!!!!!!

Hey new reader and subscriber and I'v egot to say this story is purely amazing. I loved it so much. Why doesn't Gerard give his shopping vision his number? Update wicked soon!

Chapter two was amazing!!! =D =D =D
I feel bad that I don't have time to go into detail with my comment but oh well.

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Oh god. Erika, you're writing this story too? ... This is going to be one of the most amazing stories on this site. No joke.

Wow, you were right about that. I need time to come down...
It was...amazing and fantastic and astounding.
I loved the contrast between the, pretty repulsive, nameless date and Frank. I was actually disgusted by his date, which is good.
I felt bad for Frank though, Gerard seems to be a bit of a tease.

Sorry this isn't as great a comment as the ones up there ^ but I just wanted to let you know that it is an amazing, exquisite story. Hope there's more updates coming this way.

I really love this.
I love how descriptive everything is, I can imagine it in my head, and that's something new.
I love how Gerard is so picky, and he knows what he wants, even if it is Frank. :P
I like how you made Frank too, he seemed innocent at first, but now I think he's just as bad as Gerard, encouraging things, just as bad as Gerard does.
Amazing story,
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loved it! the first chapter was great, bu this one was even better!