^ Aw, cute, and thanks for the impatience. It means that we got to you ;) but, y'know, next chapter is Erika's responsability, and if she needs her time, we have to wait. It will be worth it. Trust me :tehe:
Oh my god, Apple! I'm so addicted to this, you have no idea! XP I've had to switch computers once because of time exceedments, but this story is SO amazing, you have no idea! I'm so proud that I know someone who can write this well, and have such a great style, and I'm sitting here glowing w/ happiness (my friends words not mine) and it's all because of you! XP
This is the most sensual, erotic story I think I have ever read. The sexual tension between Gerard and Frank is almost unbearable. Can't wait for more!
Hey new reader and subscriber and I'v egot to say this story is purely amazing. I loved it so much. Why doesn't Gerard give his shopping vision his number? Update wicked soon!
Wow, you were right about that. I need time to come down... It was...amazing and fantastic and astounding. I loved the contrast between the, pretty repulsive, nameless date and Frank. I was actually disgusted by his date, which is good. I felt bad for Frank though, Gerard seems to be a bit of a tease.
Sorry this isn't as great a comment as the ones up there ^ but I just wanted to let you know that it is an amazing, exquisite story. Hope there's more updates coming this way.
I really love this. I love how descriptive everything is, I can imagine it in my head, and that's something new. I love how Gerard is so picky, and he knows what he wants, even if it is Frank. :P I like how you made Frank too, he seemed innocent at first, but now I think he's just as bad as Gerard, encouraging things, just as bad as Gerard does. Amazing story, <666