July 12th, 2009 at 06:40pm
Unbound the Wild Ride - Comments
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Very good chapter, sorry this is extremely basic, but I'm under a lot of stress right now.July 12th, 2009 at 02:27pm
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Awsum update! And congradulations on getting married!!!! And about the sex scene...I think you should go for it, even though I'm young. I'm writing a story too and I don't know if I should have a sex scene or not. But I think you should give it a try.July 12th, 2009 at 05:59am
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I think you should write a sex scene. Not that you NEED to but if you want to write one then you should be able to write one. Your story does have the NC warning so little kids shouldn't even be reading the story.
I really like your story but I am wondering what will happen to little Frankie. Aw...
I like your story and will be waiting for next chapter/update. :D
Ciao.July 12th, 2009 at 02:59am -
you can deff. put a sex scene in here,
you can have it a mild discreet sex scene if you don't want to corrupt the youngin's
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awsome story!
please update soon!
xoxo
:DJuly 11th, 2009 at 11:35am -
Loved the chapter, especially since Anna was in it. Can't wait for another update :)July 11th, 2009 at 10:34am
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xD I'd completely forgot to read this till now lol xD. Thank goodness I still had the link copied otherwise I'm be screwed =D.
I LOVED this part! Finally one of the girls is in the story =D.July 11th, 2009 at 08:41am -
Chapter 16: I hope Jen doesnt push Brian away. They need each other and she knows it!July 11th, 2009 at 06:53am
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Loved it, can't wait for more! :)July 9th, 2009 at 12:18am
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This was a VERY good chapter =D. Finally Brian, and Skye can start having something of a relationship ^_^.July 8th, 2009 at 05:43pm
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i loved it!
and i can't for more and to see what happens :]July 8th, 2009 at 03:35pm -
The latest chapter was good. :D I'm still sad thatyou Eden killed Andy! How dare she!? But I thought this chapter was cute and you included me!! Yayz! And you're right, with him out of the way it does leave a better chance at BrianxJen. XD
Update soon!!!
Also just out of curiousity, if things pick up between Brian and Jen, are you going to add a smex scene?July 8th, 2009 at 03:02pm -
Dudeeeee................that was a great chapter, but why did Brian have to be such a ass? Is he like pmsing or something, but at least he was like nice again, and she loves him, that's so sweet. Anyway I hope you have a nice time at your honeymoon. Tell em I said hi.July 8th, 2009 at 02:29pm
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Loved the updateJuly 8th, 2009 at 09:50am
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Chapter 15: I feel so bad for Jen that she lost Andy, but I'm also happy to because it gives her and Brian a chance to be together<3
Great update!!!July 8th, 2009 at 07:23am -
This sroy is THIS STORY IS AMAZING!!July 7th, 2009 at 03:36am
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I finally got the update... my computer's being an ass. =_= You killed Andy! My Andy! T.T Well... he's still alive for me! Haha. Afterall, he's still my character... but you killed him! T.T I want to know what happens between Brian and Jen when she gets there though.
Update soon!!!!
Congrats on getting hitched! :DJuly 6th, 2009 at 03:27am -
I FUCKING HATE YOU! YOU TOOK ANDY FROMME US. But it's okay, I'll forgive you. So that was a really good update and I sorta really can't wait for the next one.July 6th, 2009 at 02:40am
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OH MY GOD!
EDEN IS FUCKING NUTS!
brian and Jen can't help that their made for eachother :[
and CONGRATULATIONS with you getting married :]July 5th, 2009 at 03:04pm
Update soon!!!!