Okay, so my computer hates me and wouldn't let me comment until now, so IS HE FUCKING DEAD?!?!?!?! And when is the stupid bitch Eden going to die. Sorry for my bad language. :tehe:
O.O *le gasp!* Andy's dead isn't he?! Poor guy, also that was sad between Jen and Brian at the diner. T.T But not as sad if Andy's dead! TT.TT Update soon!!!!
I loved the chapter, especially how you put some of it in Andy's viewpoint. I'm thinking either he's cheating on her or some vampire's got him. Can't wait to find out and i loved the length of the chapter :)
Meeeerrrroooooowwww -glomps- I've been dieing to read the updates, and now I can!!!! OMG! I loved it when she finally said the three words!!!! OMG! I'm gushing!!!!
OMG! She's alive! I knew she couldn't die, because really, what would you write about then? But anyway, that was a great chapter. And of course she loves him(even if she only thinks it right now) how could you not. He is so damn sexy. And sorry I'm rambling. xD
Awesome chapter! Yet? When's she going to become a vampire?! And ahh, it's hopeless now for my Andy isn't it? T.T Also! I seen who you pick for Zayden(btw awesome name!) but that was Yesung from Super Junior wasn't it? I should've known you'd pick that smexy dude. He's hott! ... but not as hot as Johnny! <3 Update soon!!!
Hmmmm...your writing intrigues me. It's rare for me to feel the emotion of the writer and characters through a story, but I do with this one. Good job!
It's that old girlfriend of his, isn't it? XD She probably is old, if she's a vampire but I bet it is! Who's gonna save her?! Is she going to die? O.o That'd be a little weird to have your main character die... in like the beginning of the story.... unless you bring in another main character. XD Loved the new banner! Update soon!!!