Crowded - Comments

This is amazing. Beautifully written. I hope you keep writing! I was sad when it ended!

Uhm... Can I say, A-Fucking-Mazing?!?!?! I'm only on Chapter 13, but wow.... I think 11 is my personal favorite. XD Anywho, I look forward to finishing this up!! ~Twitch.

love the network joke

awww! I was reading comments and now I know the ending >:0 whatever I'm gonna keep reading xD

chapter 40 <3
I wanted Jamie and Billie to be together like really bad but that chapter is soo cute... poor Jamie. I shall continue reading :P

I made an account JUST to read Crowded based on all the things I hear on LJ.

That said, I got all the way to ch. 12 in one go, and love it!

May or may not have been a good idea to read it right before going to bed though... ;)

Just found the rest of "Crowded" here on Mibba, and am thrilled to have read it! You have GOT to be a professional writer. Simply amazing - you have fabulous skills. Now, I'm getting into "Tangled." Please don't EVER stop!

I just read the first couple of chapters again and went into a fit of giggles.
It's really late (er, or should I say early morning?) here, so I'll have to finish rereading it all tomorrow.

I love your work; it's never boring and always surprises me in a different way everytime I read it.

This is, without a doubt, the hottest thing I've read in my entire life. I can't praise you enough
I know now that it was worth digging through all these layers of crap to find diamonds like this.

Hiphopapotamus:

Btw i thought you should know this gripped me more than 1984, which Jamie made me read earlier this month. You are officially a better author than orwell. Just sayin!

Let's retain our grip on reality, Bonj! 1984 is something that you really have to be in the mood for, it's pretty dark. I think Down and Out in Paris and London is actually better, but most people don't agree :)

Thanks everyone for your comments! I'm so happy and relieved that you liked the ending, I agonised over it a great deal! Annoyingly, in my haste to update it before I went away, I posted the wrong version of the last chapter, the one that I HADN'T edited. I realised this on the way to Scotland and wanted to hit things, because I knew I wouldn't be able to get on here and change it for 2 weeks. Anyway, it's done now and it was kind of you to not point out all the mistakes in it :P xxx

EEEEEEE! I love this story sooo much.That ending was lovely, i'm actually a little choked up that it's over. You are my favourite author, i must say.
Tre and Billie are adorable and so are Pyro Jay and Jamie. And the kids were so awesomely understanding and so was Adrienne and the whole album art thing and Billie's note was awesome. Gah! seriously, i can't believe it's over. I am seriously gutted.
Thanks xx :)

wow GREAT story seriously :)

Uhhh, Elle my darling i have had back to back shifts since last week and only just got the chance to catch up and i can’t believe its FINISHED! Honestly, its amazing. The chapter where they got together i read the whole thing with my sleeve in my mouth and my eyes wide open then that line about just loving each other made me make a really bizarre noise . ive decided that if you cna come up with lines like that you must be the most romantic girlfriend ever and i wish i was straight so i could just marry you right now, maybe over skype. Also, i fairly sure ch42 broke the terms of use for the internet cafe i read it in so i had to read it double speed and hope no one walked past me. Aaaand the ending was amaing, didn’t see the kissing artwork thing coming, youre dead clever elliesmellie. Im glad everyone lived happy ever after. Btw i thought you should know this gripped me more than 1984, which Jamie made me read earlier this month. You are officially a better author than orwell. Just sayin! Love you love you xxxxxxxxxxxxx

EEK! I can't believe it's actually over. Great ending to a great story Ellie! :)

That was an absolutely Awesome ending, cant believe its ended!!

thats so cool!!!!!!
So Jay and Jamie, eh?
I never saw that coming.... i dont even know why.
Please make another story?
I'd love you forever!!!!

So I read the first... was it 19? chapters of this a couple of years ago. I remember it distinctly because I couldn't stop reading and I was definitely supposed to be studying for finals. Instead, I was reading this.

A few weeks ago I saw you were finishing this story. I only started to catch up a couple of days ago. I finished it in two separate sittings. :tehe:

But anyway... this was great. I have to say, I laughed my ass off at how badass Joey was running away to Kansas. Fortunately, I'm pretty sure no one heard me. Now this story's over though. And I'm kind of sad because I got so into it. I really, really this story. You did incredible.

Also, I love how you included 21st Century Breakdown in this story. I consider it a good thing you took a nice, long break. Gah! I need some time to gather my thoughts because my brain exploded at the greatness.

Elle, you are the wind beneath my wings...and all of that ;)

Haha, no, but really I am utterly depressed that Crowded is over. I shall miss your conflicted Tre and your gutted Billie Joe...and how sweet they are now that they are finally together. Thank you for writing us such an amazing story! xx

All together now: AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAW.

It wasn't gorgonzola ZR, don't worry. It was just dead dead sweet.

Oh bless. How lovely. And the kids being all 'one mom's enough' etc etc. I love rock star kids. XD