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Wonderful ending. I got kind of misty eyed. I feel like such a girl.

eeeeeeeeeee that was such a good ending! seriously, Jay and Jamie are so gorgeous together, and the note from Billie was perfect and the phone conversation.
and the party chapter! with all the kids! They are such sweethearts.

Well done on getting it finished, truly one of the best stories I have ever read.
Have the best time on your trip! You deserve it hehe.

xo

Thanks Leisha... no, you are not a tool at all, haha. Well, it's all up now. I'm off for 2 weeks, thank you all SO much for your comments while I was writing this story, you are all totally amazing.

Byeeeee! xx

Holy fuck, this story actuall couldn't get any better!
With my last comment I was going to say jay and Jamie! But didn't want to look like a tool if it didn't happen, haha, very pleased it did! You've made my very crappy day very happy :)

worshipgdboys:

Ok, your work is done, You win at life. You can go and leave us all for sunnier climes with a clear conscience

LOL. I'm going to Scotland... but here's hoping the sun will shine!

I really have no response to that comment other than THANKS ;)

Ok, your work is done, You win at life. You can go and leave us all for sunnier climes with a clear conscience, I am just going to sit here and tremble a little. Don't mind me.

Have a fab time, you must be exhausted. Thanks you so much for working to get this to this point before your hols, it certainly more than makes up for the three year gap, Who know what plot bunnies may strike while you are away - no pressure or anything!!

Tracey x

YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY.

You get awesome cake for being awesome, Elle.

*hands over awesome cake*

That is all. ;)

worshipgdboys:

Killing me, killing me dead! The emotions, the uncertainty, the romance, the sap, oh my god. I so wish I was eloquent, and could tell you how much this story means to me, but you'll just have to read between the lines. You so deserve this holiday, just for making my day/week/month with this. I have looked at this last chapter very hard, and can't understand why you are not 100% happy with it, polaroids, the introductions, billie/tre, jamie/jay, tipsy Mike, what's not to like? I hope you have a fantastic time, I'll be rereading this all again once I have recovered when the end is published. I suspect I will have a hard time knowing it is finally finished!!

:D Thank you, thank you!!!! It means lots and lots to me that you like the story so much. I think I was concerned that the introductions were a bit too sappy and that I'd thrown Jay and Jamie together too quickly... but I'm glad you thought it was good! *hugs*

iATEjimmysWORLD:

“We’re just gonna love each other,” he whispered, shakily, “... how’s that?”

*melts into a useless puddle on the floor*

Elle, you kill me. In the best way possible :)

*sweeps you off floor*

Thanks, honey. I'm glad you liked that line, I was wondering if I was overdoing the sap! xxxx

Killing me, killing me dead! The emotions, the uncertainty, the romance, the sap, oh my god. I so wish I was eloquent, and could tell you how much this story means to me, but you'll just have to read between the lines. You so deserve this holiday, just for making my day/week/month with this. I have looked at this last chapter very hard, and can't understand why you are not 100% happy with it, polaroids, the introductions, billie/tre, jamie/jay, tipsy Mike, what's not to like? I hope you have a fantastic time, I'll be rereading this all again once I have recovered when the end is published. I suspect I will have a hard time knowing it is finally finished!!

I think you should put Jamie and Pyro Jay in a locked closet together and see what happens. Oh yes, it would be magical.

“We’re just gonna love each other,” he whispered, shakily, “... how’s that?”

*melts into a useless puddle on the floor*

Elle, you kill me. In the best way possible :)

holy shit holy shit holy shit!!!

That was the best chapter...ever!
Tre and Billie are the most adorably gorgeous and cute couple in the history of the world and I am struggling to come up with coherent thought because I loved that chapter so much. My heart was racing while I was reading it !
haha, I am ridiculous.

=]

zildjianrocker:

Flaming Phalanges!:

OMG ELLE YOU HAVE CHANGED MY FAVOURITE SONG ON 21CB AND MADE IT BETTER.

Also, how did I change it? I didn't mean to!

And thanks for your suggestions, hahaha ;)

Because you've made it about Billie and Tre so it gives it a different layer. I'm gonna think of them whenever I hear it now.

I'm pretty late in joining the adventure that is this story, but it's one of the best slashes I've ever read, and I had to drop by and say that.

Much, much love all of it.

Flaming Phalanges!:

OMG ELLE YOU HAVE CHANGED MY FAVOURITE SONG ON 21CB AND MADE IT BETTER.

Also, how did I change it? I didn't mean to!

And thanks for your suggestions, hahaha ;)

Thank you so much guys, I'm happy you liked it. I just hope the next chapter lives up to expectations! I've built this up so much that there is pressure for it suitably climatic (I mean the plot, by the way, not... them).

The next chapter IS safe for work, Jonny, sorry about that XD To make up for it, I've added one line into chapter 37 to placate your whining - see if you can spot it!

Not long to go now guys. Tracey - I AM hoping to get it all up but you might need to wait for the very last chapter as I'm still not sure about it. I'll do my best but I won't leave you waiting on a cliffhanger! xxx

OMG ELLE YOU HAVE CHANGED MY FAVOURITE SONG ON 21CB AND MADE IT BETTER.

Omgosh.

And Jonny!!!!!!!!! *mega hugs*

Tre's running to Billie isn't he?

You know what you should do? You should have them perform the song and desrcibe every detail. And you should do the same when they play Jesus of Suburbia. That'd be mega awesome. ;)

Omg that was so cute! Such good use of those lyrics!!!! You're brilliant!!!!!!!!!!
:)

Elle slow the f down. I cannot keep up this pace and it is very stressful for me.

first of all i almost DIED at my appearance in chapter thirtywhatever, i giggled all the way through and completely agree with what FP said (F fucking P! ) i know im very pro these days but i would definitely have needed him to take off his shirt at the very least, come ON.

joey and bj and the lyrics almost killed me, the whole time i was thinking 'no she isn't, no she isn't, then he mentioned last night on earth and i was like omg, she bloody is you know

so anyway, yessss, im sure that tre is about to run into bj's arms, tackle him to the ground and show him what he's been missing. i hope the next chapter is absolutely not safe for work. taraa xxx