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  • worshipgdboys

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    Tre is going to do the right thing, I can feel it in my bones! I am so pleased Billie decided to let Tre have the lyrics, one person has to make a move. I agree that this is one of your better chapters, and that is no mean feat. Will this story be complete by the time you go on hols? Honestly not sure what i want the answer to be, I really want a conclusion, but still don't want this to end. Now i am as conflicted as Tre!
    August 6th, 2009 at 02:05pm
  • zildjianrocker

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    MusicDrownLife, I like your icon. And thank you!

    Liz, you are up either early or late! I like conflicted Tre too :) Thank youuu xxxxxx
    August 6th, 2009 at 11:09am
  • Music.DrownLife

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    Awes! That is so fucking cute. He better go to him and not be an ass.
    August 6th, 2009 at 10:55am
  • iATEjimmysWORLD

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    Chapter 39 has been my favorite (non threesome chapter)...so far.

    Conflicted Tre and Helpful Jamie warms my heart! xx
    August 6th, 2009 at 10:00am
  • Music.DrownLife

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    Ah! I love this story. It is amazing!
    August 6th, 2009 at 06:44am
  • Flaming Phalanges!

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    Sentimental side? What sentimental side? I haven't got one of those.
    August 5th, 2009 at 11:03pm
  • zildjianrocker

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    Ahahaha. I'm bringing out FP's sentimental side?

    And YES! I quite agree.

    Thanks folks. More soon!
    August 5th, 2009 at 10:51pm
  • Flaming Phalanges!

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    Oh gosh ZR, you make me want to crawl into Billie's bunk and give him a hug, and that's saying something because I'd never EVER do that without a massively goo reason. ;)

    I don't think Billie should go chasing, Tre needs to come back to him and apologise for being a dipshit and then they can kiss and make up. Yes?
    August 5th, 2009 at 10:49pm
  • Lunacy.Fringe.

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    Eeep! I'm so happy it's all coming back together!!!!
    August 5th, 2009 at 10:10pm
  • germangirl94

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    oh nice I hope the message is from Jamie...or Tre
    August 5th, 2009 at 08:10pm
  • zildjianrocker

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    Thanks Tracey, you are a top commenter! Smiley

    And haha, I did consider having him walk on the bus but nooo. Give them time! ;)
    August 5th, 2009 at 07:56pm
  • worshipgdboys

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    Oooh, quick updates indeed. The emotions are still pretty raw, but it is good to see they are all starting to deal with it better. i was convinced Tre was going to walk onto the bus right at the end.
    August 5th, 2009 at 07:48pm
  • worshipgdboys

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    I feel such a selfish cow for being pleased you are gong on holiday and we get more updates! I adore the relationship between father and son, and glad that Tre is starting to analyse his own feelings a little. I don't need to tell you to keep up the good work, it jsut comes naturally to you!
    August 5th, 2009 at 02:55pm
  • Flaming Phalanges!

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    Can Pyro Jay ask her out in a really adorable way that's quite like 'I don't give a fuck if you say yes or not, I'm just asking'

    D'you know what I mean?

    Oh and I love that Jason's included. Both Jasons. But specifically my Jason. XD
    August 5th, 2009 at 01:52pm
  • germangirl94

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    great as always
    August 5th, 2009 at 11:56am
  • zildjianrocker

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    Thanks guys. Hurray! Yes, more updates soon.

    Don't worry, Loz, I won't be too mean to her. I'm glad you liked it!

    And yeah, i suppose it is a bit out of character that he didn't grope him a bit but that would have distracted from the story so I pretended he was a professional! :D
    August 5th, 2009 at 09:52am
  • iATEjimmysWORLD

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    That Joey is one smart kid ;)

    And I loved the Dr. Tunnock reference! ...And the fact that you incorporated Last Night On Earth into the story because that's totally about Tre! You're brilliant, Elle. Brilliant xx
    August 5th, 2009 at 06:40am
  • Flaming Phalanges!

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    Why did my little thumbs up man not show? :(
    August 5th, 2009 at 04:48am
  • Flaming Phalanges!

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    OH MY DAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAYS ZR.

    It's quarter to four in the morning and I've finally got up to date. Fuuuuuuuuuuuuck.

    Tre's a dipshit, Joey's awesome, Jamie's a sweetheart (and absolutely can't do any wrong in my eyes so don't destroy her TOO much, will you?) and Billie is sweet if a little pathetic.

    And yay @ cameo from Doctor Jonny! Although I find it slightly out of character that he didn't grope Billie at least a little bit. ;)

    It's too late for me to write proper sentences giving you all the praise you desrve but this was sooooooooooo majorly awesome and you well need to update it soon.

    I'm going to watch the God channels on TV now. :up:
    August 5th, 2009 at 04:48am
  • Leisha-LUNA

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    oh its beautiful!!!!
    =]
    I love Joey.
    very excited for heaps of updates I must say!
    August 5th, 2009 at 01:33am