More Than I Bargained For - Comments

Trouble Comes Knocking. Or Not.

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What was I saying?! Stay here? With mom gone? No, no! That was a horrible idea. Please say no..

Please say yes, Brian. :XD

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You won’t even notice I’m here.”

I'm not so sure about that...

Btw, that pizza toppings sound yummy.

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”Are you a big Mötley Crüe fan? People always tell me that I remind them of the bassist, Nikki Sixx.”

I burst out laughing. If you only knew, little Nikki. If you only knew..

Lmao

I love your favorites in this chapter. But I'm pretty sure it was disappointment that she saw in his eyes. My gut is telling me so. :P

And I'm liking the banner.

It Felt Right, It Was Wrong.

Please. Who could even resist kissing Brian. ;)

At the lap dance part I was like "Yay! Lap dance." Then when Zacky 'saves the day' comes the robotized missiles-engaged-target-found-shoot-Zacky voice. It probably wouldn't end nicely, but it would definitely spark something between the two. Oh well...

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I hadn’t heard enough to know for sure what they were talking about but I felt somewhat certain that it was about me.

I think so too.

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Brian had decided to come with me, which had earned him a pretty stern look from Zacky before we left.

Ok, something is definitely going on.

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”So..”

”So..” Why was this so awkward? ”I had fun tonight,” I said.

”Yeah, me too,” he smiled.

Lmao, they sound like they were saying goodybe after coming back from a date.

OMG! THEY KISSED! Should I be happy right now? 'Cause I am happy. Even though it would have to be weird kissing your mom's boyfriend. But then again, it's Brian who she kissed. Like I said before. Who could ever resist him. :P

Honestly, I think she sounded to 'cheery' for someone who doesn't remember last night's events. I would've been sulking around hiding from everyone and avoiding them, until someone confronted me and told me I behaved and I have nothing to worry about. But it's still a nice cover. Although I don't think it'll last for long, hence the next chapter's title.

The Truth.

The part where she told him that she knew about the kiss was unexpected. I thought Brian or someone else was going to provoke her somehow and she'd confess that she remembers.

Holy crap, she slept with Matt! And am I imagining things or did Brian seem jealous when he first discovered Cassie slept with Matt?

Okay, can I just say something here? I think Brian acted like a complete jerkface. And the last part pretty much explains the title.

Eh, I felt awkward when I wrote my first sex scene, too. You did good for it being your first. ;)

There's A Reason For Everything.

I'm getting the feeling that Zacky knows more that he lets on.

Brian totally redeemed himself in my eyes towards the end of the chapter. Damn, I wonder what happens next.

Absolutely in love with this story!!
Can't wait for more!!

I vote Brian!!!!! lol

this update was really good. Brian sounded so hurt when he was
talking to her...i'm glad he finally realizes that he indeed did, sleep
with his 'girlfriend's' daughter...can't wait for more:)

Ok...so I just read this entire story....holy cow! I love it!

I really hope things can work out for Brian and Cassie. He really seems to have feelings for her. I can understand how upset he would be about finding her with Matt, but in her defense, he is with her mom.

Great story! Can't wait to read more!

“Can I come in?” It was a strange question to ask since he was already in my room but I suppose he was giving me a chance to tell him to leave.

That was so sweet... I don't know why, but I found that part particularly cute. I wanted to hug him and pat his head and say "You're such a cute lil muffin"

Well, good on him for apologising sincerly and realising that he was in the wrong for how he treated her. He can't have his cake and eat it too... and he can't expect her to wait around for him to make a decision.

But I hope that they find a way to be together! They're a much better couple than him and her mum... though... that's gonna be quite awkward when she finds out =\

Oh, and I would like to vote for Matt with your new story. There's like a million and one Brian stories and very few good Matt stories, so yes... Maaatttttt!!! :D

I'm glad Brian took the first step to apologise for his actions, and at least Cassie now knows the reasons for his behaviour. He needs to sort out the situation with her mom, because he's living dangerously right now.

And as for the new story, I'm going to have to go with Brian. But then it all depends on who you find it easier to write about.

Brillaint update hun :) xx

Brian has my vote! Awe I'm glad he apologized! I'm sad your going back to work, I love the story! :)

Aw... Sad... : (
It's still amazing tho!
Keep it up!

<3
~*+Steph+*~

Matt!!!
For your next story it should be Matt!!!
Loved the update!!!
Brian sounded so sincere...

Loved it, cat wait for more. :]

oh my gooooooooodness!
this is soooooooo good!
I can't wait to see what happens!

Thats an easy one to answer....Brian! :) (although I do love Matt too, there's no real competition between them)
As for this story.... that was an interesting chapter....
I'm glad Brian has apologised.
Loved it and can't wait for more :)

Tilers Haner:

First off I wonder how for things would have gone if her mom hadn't called when she did?
And I knew it was Matt that she hooked up with!
Brian obviously has feelings for her to react like that, but I'm not sure if Brian remembers her or not? I can't make up my mind....
Loved the update, can't wait for more :)

i agree with every word:) it's so obvious he likes her, but that sucks he yelled at her like that, when he was the one who instigated the kiss, then walked off to answer his phone:? bad brian! lol. more soon!

First off I wonder how for things would have gone if her mom hadn't called when she did?
And I knew it was Matt that she hooked up with!
Brian obviously has feelings for her to react like that, but I'm not sure if Brian remembers her or not? I can't make up my mind....
Loved the update, can't wait for more :)

WOW! I cant believe she hooked up with Matt! And Brian telling her shes drunk and she needs to sleep it off, WHATTTTT, jerk! Your first sex scene was pretty good, keep em coming ;). Cant wait to read the next chapter

We had too much fun! That was the whole problem!

Um, you can never have too much fun with Brian... and it'd never be a problem. Just saying... = p

They kissed again!! Yay! You made it happen! I'm happy now :)

"Nothing big.." I giggled before I gave him a quick kiss. "But something huge."

Ahahaha, nicely done! = p Oh, and your sex scene was written very nicely, so congrats!

I'm sorry, but good on her for getting her rocks off with Matt! It's not like she knew who he was beforehand... well, that's probably not a good thing in general... but it's not like she did it on purpose to hurt Brian. Boy needs to get over himself and remember exactly what situation he's in...

Now I'm mad a Brian. He had no right to speak to her that way and get all judgemental when he's no better.

He's in need of a serious spanking...

... I will volunteer my services. Strictly in a punishment sense, of course = p

MOAR! I NEED MOAR!!!!!!!!!!!
It's sooo amazing, it almost made me cry!
I felt like I'm actually part of the story!
Write more please?
I'm dying to know what happens next!

<3
~*+Steph+*~

Well, in her defence she didn't know who Matt was seeings as he hadn't been around, and Brian really doesn't have the right to talk to her like that, considering he's the one in a relationship with her mom. But I wonder if he does remember what Cassie told him, because that's going to make things as awkward as hell between him and her mom if he does.
Fantastic update hun, loved it :) xx

Oh my God!!!
Matt is so sexy!!!
About time he found out!!!
I'm so waiting for your next update

XDDD

Omr you had me in convulsions over the sheer awkwardness of this story! Gah!

*face palm* Matt. Matt....good lord almighty Matt.

I really have no clue what to say other OMR which I've been repeating since I finished the chapter like 5 minutes ago.