More Than I Bargained For - Comments

That's definitely not a situation I'd like to find myself in. Nice update. I wonder, though... does Brian remember?

Looks like an interesting start!
Haha, he better not have called his mom "babe", that would just be sooo wrong!
Hope you gonna go and update soon!

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but the old saying is true, there’s no place like home

Oh, you got that right. :)

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My friends and I simply called him little Nikki.

LMAO. Little Nikki :XD

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”I’d like for you to meet him. I think he could be one.” Whoa. That was unexpected.

I don't know why, but at this point I really started to think that her mom's dating 'little Nikki'.

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"Honey, wait a second", he said to whoever was on the phone and looked down at me. "I'm sorry about that. Are you okay?"

Oh my god! It was him. Him! The guy I had been thinking about the whole year was here, standing in front of me, talking to me, looking at me. Looking at me pretty strangely actually. Why? Oh wait, he was talking to me!

Hahaha, I'm pretty sure that was her mom on the phone...

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2. He just called someone else babe and I had a feeling he wasn't talking to his mother.

Nope, but it might be your mother :tehe:

Loved the first chapter. I think this is a start of a wonderful story. And if my assumption is correct, there will be a lot of drama. Can't wait to read more.