Before It's Over - Comments

chapter 32 was great as always.
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oh and u posted 32 three times btw

love this story. I'm so glad they're together.
also wanted to let you know the last chapter posted like 3 times.

Better hurry back. I don't know how long this wonderful update can hold me over for!
Excellent writing, as usual.
Have fun in Europe! :D

OH MY GOOOOOOOODDDD YESSSSSSS!
FINALLY!
Yesyesyesyes oh my gosh, they are so cute together :3
Update soon!

Ave was an idiot, I'm totally stoked they're together now. :))

Update soon please!!!

Great job! Update soon? :D

yay she finally got her head out of her ass.... and i mean that in the best way possible !!!!!!! i am soooo glad that it isnt over yet u kinda had me worried there for a while

aww yay, ave caved :D

Ya Go Kyle

There are so many things I want to say. I'll start off with the first and most obvious:
Finally! Even though I haven't been here long.
And the way you described the kiss had to be one of the best ways I've ever read. Seriously. It was just purely excellent.
This chapter had subtle humor, too! And I was convinced that she wouldn’t say yes right up to the kiss.
My favorite thing in stories is cutesy stuff, and you had it. I'm blissfully cutesified right now. But my favorite thing in this chapter had to be the progressive deterioration of the heart. It was just one constant that really put Avery's feelings on display for me.
This is great writing. You should be proud of yourself. I want you to give yourself a pat on the back right now. Go ahead. You deserve it.

FINALLY!
FINALLY FINALL FFFFIIIIINNNNAAAALLLLYYYYY!!!!
xD

Avery and Kyle are together.
Your story is simpily amazing, and I so happy its not the end.

Keep up the amazing work.

:)

YAYAYYAYYAYYAYYAYYAYYAYYAYYYAYYAYYAYYAYYAYYYAYYAYYAYYAYYAYYAYYAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
<3 <3 <3 <3 THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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all of the build-up was worth it, what a wonderful moment :)

yay :D

I realized that I was wrong and that everything that everyone had been telling me was right.
Imagine me, sitting at my computer desk and reading dilligently and when this line is read, i held my arms up above my head and look up, yelling "FINALLY!"
That JUST happened.

Oh. My. Gosh!
I am so happy Avery and Kyle FINALLY got together!
Yeah, it's just been A YEAR!
I was reading the beginning, and i was like "IF SHE REALLY DOESN'T LET THEM GET TOGETHER, I SWEAR...!"
But, you did, so all is well haha :)
You, my friend. Are such an amazing writer.
Being able to stretch that out for 31 chapters?
I would've given in, like, chapter 15?
I love you :) haha.

it is about time.
I could hug you endlessly right now.
chapter 31 has become my most beloved chapter

Chapter 31: YES YES YES!!! WOO HOO!!! *does happy dance*

I've been waiting so long for this--yay! :D <3

WOOP WOOP!
YAY! FINALLY! <3

Fuckin' finally!
So I was definitely tearing up when KyBu was upset.
On that note, I shouldn't even be on here right now 'cause I promised someone I'd update so keep 'em comin'=D