Before It's Over - Comments

Thank God!

Awww she finally caved(:
I wonder how everyones going to take the news.
Cute couple.
Update soon.

nawwww!!!! love it! postpostpostpostpost!!!!!!!!!! asap! good luck with the exams!

Sure, he was a very determined person, but determination does not give you supper powers.
and
Eventually, I got fed up and sort of shouted for him to spit it out.
were my favorite parts.

Two more words:
EXCELLENT CLIFFHANGER.

Yeah, so you are fer sure a beast at updating...
I love how at all Philly shows bands find it necessary to sing that theme song, okay, I do sing along when they do...
To keep me from further rambling I say you should keep 'em comin'=D

Yes!!!!
Victory Dancee!
xD

I swear Avery better not do anything stupidd.
And I know all about that plauge called Final Exams, but my motto is
"If ya dont know it by now, your never gonna learn it."

Lol

But, once again, The chapter was amazing as always and keep up the good work...
and the sexy Kyle-ness...I can picture him running in the rain
haha
hotttt!

lol
:)

OH MY GOSH I'M GONNA KIIIILLLLLLLLLLLLLLL YOU!
And now i have to wait a while week for this chapter to come out??
You're sooo evil!
I swear, if Avery doesn't just let herself be with Kyle.... omg.
Shit's going downnn.

On a bright note: I think you did fabulous in the set up.
It seemed fitting that they're stuck on the bus together during a storm.
I am so pumped for the next chapter!

omg i love this story! plzzzzzzzz update

arghhhhh y is she being like this??????????????!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! not ok with me... i can say what i want to happen even though its prolly the farthest from what actually will happen but i want her to fall asleep and him bring her back to his bunk then he lays down with her and then she will talk in her sleep and he will get xctied and wake her up and because shes sleepy she will tell him... and as much as i want that to happen it would mean the story would be over and that is something i dont want to happen so................... UPDATE SOON AND PUT ME OUT OF MY MISERY!!!

awwww. i freaking love kyle (: they need to get together soon or they are both gonna explode and so am i hahaha ♥

Grrrr.
I ready to hit Avery in the face
lol
Shesssh she reallly needs to stop dening herself, because the feelings never gonna go away, and im speaking frm personal experiance.

Pleasssse make Avery and Kyle get together, I know is bound to happen, but im itching for that chapter to be up lol

Great update! :)

Seriously, this is good. Really catchy. Though, I must say that the minor grammar mistakes, however less of them there are as the story progresses, are still subtly irking me.

And in chapter 24 when you mentioned Evan Lester? I just about fell outta my seat. I'm guessing you're from Texas. Just a guess. ;D

And the F!F!F! reference in that same chapter made me smile. It's sad the band's defunct.

So, yeah. In all, I love it. Sub'd.

I have the urge to bang my forehead against my keyboard.
AVERY IS KILLING ME!
And Kyle :(
POOR KYLE! </3
She's being so ridiculous! Gosh.
I have the feeling Kyle is going to make a more dramatic move on Avery after they have a huge confrontation about the awkwardness thats going on between them right now.
And i swear, Avery needs to GET OVER HERSELF and just allow herself to be happy.
She OBVIOUSLY likes Kyle, and now she's breaking herself AND Kyle's heart by avoiding him.

naww! Poor Kyle! Avery needs to get over it! post asap!

Why are you conspiring against KyBu, all he wants is love!
I'm thinking that drama is gonna go down in these next few chapters, and something huge will happen in oh, I don't know, maybe chapter 31;);)
Keep 'em comin'=D

i think things are just going to keep getting more and more awkward between them until it all blows up in a big awkward mess

You should post the next chapter tonight just because I know you have it done and you're just being mean and won't post it. So my plan is to go in your room and hack your computer and read it tonight when your sleeping. mwhahaha!

AJSHFLKAS THIS UPDATE WAS SO GOOD ASKF <333

okay. I'm calm (:
You should seriously consider updating, yes? I'm suffering from Kyle-withdrawal at the moment.

Great Story!
Pleaseee let Kyle and Avery get together.
Its killing me. haha

Im glad she finally realizes she likes him.

OH MY GOD
oh. my. god.

KYLE NOOOO WHY WOULD YOU JUST WALK AWAY?
DON'T JUST PUT UP WITH AVERY'S BULLSHIT D:

alksdfjalksdf.
this chapter upset me
the way they're being so obvious about how the feel, yet Avery isn't doing anything
because she's got a stupid idea that she needs to prove something

WHO CARES
KYLE, AVERY. THINK OF KYLE.

"Oh, you guys are so cute together! Thanks!"
bahahahaha that made me laugh so much
someone had to say it
and that girl has the same name as me, which made it even better
since that's really just what I've wanted to say this whole time haha

okay this comment is weird
I'm trying to be appropriate since I'm on a school computer right now xD

BUT THANKS FOR UPDATING
IT WAS GLORIOUS
EVEN THOUGH AVERY IS BEING A BUTTHEAD STILL D: