Right Back Where We Started From - Comments

  • roxy278

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    Vicente is a total douche! What the hell was his problem saying all those things to her?!?!
    Carlos getting into a fight is really sexy in my opinion. =]
    More soon!
    October 27th, 2009 at 07:27am
  • alyssa-anne

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    So, I'm really confused as to why Padilla would say those things.
    And how he even knew about the miscarriage to be honest.
    It seemed totally random, like it came out of nowhere... Just confusing.

    Anyway, it was great that Carlos stood up for her, though!
    More soon!
    October 27th, 2009 at 02:56am
  • snowboarder79

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    Okay Vicente is a dick ! I can't believe he said that to Alex. There's no doubt about it that he deserved that punch !
    Nice update ! <3
    October 27th, 2009 at 12:54am
  • lynne1988

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    Oh. My. Damn.

    If I were Alex, and Vicente had said those things to me, I would have hauled off and belted him in the face. Just saying.

    But it is really sexay that Carlos beat him up. Heh. Especially when he was all "I did it for you babayyy." That made me swoon.

    *sigh*

    I miss seeing him already.
    October 27th, 2009 at 12:51am
  • alyssa-anne

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    *raises hand* I didn't think they went too fast. I mean, COME ON LADIES.
    It's Carlos Quentin. Jeesh. Who could resist THAT? Dayum.
    I love how cute he is with her. The dance was adorable.
    Loved it! <3
    October 13th, 2009 at 11:14pm
  • snowboarder79

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    Awee that's so sweet of him to do that for Alex after she had a mini meltdown : ) ...
    Hopefully this "taking things slow" thing doesn't last too long ; ) .
    That chapter was adorable, I can't wait for more <333
    October 13th, 2009 at 08:06pm
  • mully17

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    Awwww that was cute!! They are adorable together
    October 13th, 2009 at 08:06pm
  • lynne1988

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    *sigh*

    SO ADORABLE. I like how he's all, whipped. Lmfao.

    AND. "I thought I'd try to get them to go slow again.
    We'll see how long that lasts though =)
    "

    It's CARLOS QUENTIN.

    It's not going to last long. =D
    October 13th, 2009 at 07:20pm
  • snowboarder79

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    Wow, that was hot hot hot !
    I Loved it ! Seriously you did an amazing job with this chapter !
    I wouldn't mind having a date like that hahha :P
    Again, great job...more soon please : ]
    September 29th, 2009 at 09:28pm
  • georgii

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    Well, I wasn't expecting that!! I thought they were taking things slow, though I kinda like their idea of slow.
    I love big brother AJ, and Carlos' response to the intentions question, haha.
    September 29th, 2009 at 07:42am
  • roxy278

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    HOT SEXY TIMES!! Love it!
    That probably has to be one of me fave chapters!
    September 29th, 2009 at 04:43am
  • alyssa-anne

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    ROUGH HOT SEX.
    I loved that. <333
    More soon!
    September 29th, 2009 at 04:06am
  • lynne1988

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    “First of all, what are your intentions with Alexandra?” he asked Carlos.

    “I plan on having rough, hot sex with her all night long,” Carlos said with a serious expression, causing Alex’s eyes to widen and AJ to stand there speechless.


    So, I know your intent was to make that like a "HA-HA" to AJ, but I legit swooned. I got hot and bothered by Carlos' quip. But I did love how AJ stayed to be her "big brother." That was very sweet of him.

    And omg, yes, it the date was quite romantic. I liked their walk through the city and SEXAY TIMES! I wasn't expecting it, really, but I'm glad you had it in there. Heh. \

    Mmm, Carlos. So irresistible. =))
    September 29th, 2009 at 04:05am
  • mully17

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    AWWW they are back together and that was so cute how Carlos is like that!
    September 29th, 2009 at 04:05am
  • georgii

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    I'm loving what good friends Alex and Gianna are and all the girly chats they have. It's nice she has some girls to talk to, working on a team of men.
    And what I love even more than that is that Carlos is taking her out on a date. I hope it's all romantic, especially seeing as it's their first one (though it seems like they should have had more, with all that they've been through!).
    Is this the story you said would be around 40 chapters? If so, I really can't wait to see what else you've got in store for it.
    Lastly, on a slightly off-topic note, I Googled Carlos again to remind myself of what he looked like and he striked me as being so typically American. Maybe it was the baseball, or maybe it was the way he looked, I don't know, but it just screamed American at me. That's how I imagine American guys to look.
    September 26th, 2009 at 08:06am
  • alyssa-anne

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    I'm glad things are working out for both couples!! SO cute.

    And as usual I love the way AJ harrassed Carlos. He's adorable. <3
    September 26th, 2009 at 07:33am
  • lynne1988

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    YAY! They are really back together!! At first when Alex was moving out I was like "What did I miss???" because I thought Carlos did something, lmfao.

    I think it's cute that AJ is protective of her, but at the same time I really want him to be happy for them. Hopefully Carlos can prove himself, haha!

    Oooh I can't wait to read about their daaaate! Heh. I hope it's all....romantic. Heyyy Carlos.

    More soon!!
    September 26th, 2009 at 05:32am
  • snowboarder79

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    God I love this story so much : D !
    I'm so happy for Carlos & Alex, they're finally getting back on track after everything that's happened.
    Anyways, great chapter, more soon please :]
    P.S. I think I'm more excited about the date than Alex : )hahaha
    September 26th, 2009 at 02:30am
  • georgii

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    Awwwww.
    She's so fragile, he needs to take care of her. I love how she wasn't sure he'd want a relationship after all she'd said to him. And I love even more that he does.
    Just awwww.
    September 19th, 2009 at 07:16pm
  • broken sticks

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    Sooo I just caught up on this story because I figured why not. Lyss has got me watching some White Sox games so I know who some of these people are. Mostly Gordon and Carlos. I don't seem to know the names of anyone else yet. Oh Jermaine he's hard to miss haha. I'm slowly learning. Anyways, this story is awesome. Holy rollercoaster of emotions! Like seriously all of the arguments and the sad moments -- losing the baby. I'm glad that Alex and Carlos are going to try a relationship now. Yay for some happy times. But I should go do the homework that I have now that I just spent a good hour and a half reading this! =)
    September 15th, 2009 at 11:24pm