Here's a Happy Birthday Cake - Comments

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First off, omnomnomnom. :tehe:

N'aww. Poor Kitten, being so tired. He seems sort of motherly in this, kind of like in the movies, haha. It's so adorable.

Andreas is so awesome. :XD Epic win.

Before having the kids, they were creative, they would have sex out doors, on the table, against a wall; pretty much everywhere they could have sex, just because it was fun and it made them feel the thrill of getting caught most of the time.
~~ Totally.

I love how they didn't actually fuck, because Eric's so tired and all. It fits in. So many stories that mention one character being tired still have them fuck regardless, and it kind of feels... odd. I dunno. :think: But because it was only a handjob, it felt right. :XD

Another epic win, Cary. As usual. :cute:

Wow. That was really wonderful. I love how you used really couplish behavior with them, and made them like a typical set of suburban parents. It really made the story seem like a true narrative, and made the characters three dimensional.

And congrats on winning the contest, you really deserved it :D

That was so cute<3 I love how you post new sutff all the time<3

:O I wasn't missing, I've been here all week! If you meant me :XD

But aw, that was really sweet =) You're such a great writer :arms:

naaaaw. first, dedication. *draws hearts* <3
second, I loved this, of corpse. it was sweet, but not too sweet and the whole idea of (mature! *gasp*) Kitten and Andy having kids and Kitten trying so hard to make everything perfect and just being so wife-ish is amazing. I love when they act so couplish, too. <3 I adore it so so so much.

"Did you ever taste the cake?" Andreas asked softly, already on his way to cut up a small piece and place it on one of the few clean plates being left.

"Didn't get time," Eric sighed, <= that is SUCH a mum thing to do. the kids have, and the mums never even taste stuff. it made me giggle.

He loved when Eric was like this, only leaning back and letting his boyfriend take care of him, seeming so submissive. <= I love it too <333

"Give me more."

"Oh, I suddenly became your slave?" Andreas chuckled, already having reached out for more of the cake.

"Last time I checked, you got too much power over me for you to be my slave." <= see, a perfect example of the couplish behaviour <3.

Smiling he leaned forward, his lips brushing over Eric's lip, licking up the cream having gotten stuck there, before pulling back again. Wondering Eric opened his eyes, blinking confused, then he smiled when seeing Andreas' eyes glitter, and he finally managed to move, sliding closer to his boyfriend <= *murmurs* <33

"Then we just say we were hugging, or something." <= AHAHAHAH. naked, right? xD

"Let's just eat the rest of the cake, then go to bed, and we can fuck tomorrow?" <= ahahah *giggles* Kitten is really acting like a woman after 20 years of marriage, yeah, let's eat and we can fuck later, okay? I;m so tired.

"You're tasting birthday cake." Eric murmured low, slowly licking Andreas' bottom lip when the man only chuckled. "Chokolate, vanilla, cream..." He stopped momentarily, moaning low by Andreas' strokes, having quickened up slightly. "S-sprinkles, sponge cake... marzipan..." <= this was so... nnngh. <3 cute, and still hot as it ~implied things <3

"No," Andreas shook his head, leaning his forehead against Eric's. "I needed you to relax, and stop feeling so stressed out still." <= AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAWW <3

amazing, as always <3.

This was adorable despite some of the typos. I really enjoyed how you incorporated the cake. These two are just so adorable together. This was very very good.

Lea love, I think you need to learn to count, you got 12 smileys, not ten :lol:

and thank for the comments my little darlings :arms:

Awwwwwww this so cute <3333 I imagine Andy feeding Eric like all the time and ut makes me wanna throw hearts all over everybody ♥♥

I love it, I just simply LOVE it <33333 Mooooooore, much mooooore!! <33

Even is there was no Sex *pouts* instead it was supercute which is of course also perfect!! <33333

L.O.V.E

Awww and it's dedicated to me Love you are amazing

My head is all fluffy now <3 I'm so... full of aww <3 This was so nice <3 ♥ Pure love.
I like Eric being mommy (! xD) and Andy being daddy. It's just so supercute <3 And Eric being so full of "Ah I gotta make everything perfect" is just cuteness personified
And them both having two little 'daughters' is just more aww then I can take

I guess this makes clear that I'm fully in love now Please count the smileys I used xD (9 so far xD)

Thanks love for making my evening <3 (10! xD)

Me loves you very much <3 (senseless comment xDDDDDD)