Fly Me Away - Comments

AHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!! UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!! WOOOOOOOOO!!!! But it's almost over!!! how how how??? I know I sound like a kid, but I want it to end happy! =( But I'm confused about one thing. Will Jackson even be able to return to his work as an angel? Seeing as he's broken like every law there is?

im sad to see this story come to an end, but it just goes to show that i stayed and supported throughout this story :] merry christmas to u 2 and a happy new year :]

Only one?
Are you serious?
Only one?
This is unfair!
I want more.
This chapter was ridiculously good.
Update soon!

Gah Update soon! I cannot wait to see how this ends!

Chapter 34

"“Attractive, graceful, intelligent—”

“A prostitute?”"

hahaha

"“Why do you say crap like that?” I explained, scowling something fierce."
my thoughts exactly!

Chapter 37

"I gasped loudly – Jackson's arm was like a steel bar around my neck. He had me in a head lock. My hands automatically grabbed hold of his forearm, instinctively trying to pry it away from my throat.

What…what was going on?!?

“Do I need to ask you again?” Jackson growled, flexing his arm tighter and making me squeak in the process."

OH MY GODDDDDDDDDD!!!!!!!

... *sigh*

you scared me!

Chapter 38

"“Where there is a Queen my dear, there is a King, and he hasn’t seen you in a very very long time.”y were taking about me. The details were vague, but that much was spelled out for me."
o_O

Chapter 40

"“You were frozen by a witch. Mariana, actually. It’s a strong spell that shuts your body down.”"

Petrificus Totalus!!!
*harry potter fan;p*

"His eyes flickered to me, then he pulled me to him."
yayy! he's starting to show affection!!

"“I won’t be leaving you again,” he stated, before placing his lips firmly on mine. I was too shocked to register what was happening. "
WOW!!! :D

"“And you are aware, are you not, that once the angels take care of the demons, you will no longer be in any danger?”"
oooooooh....Jackson will be leaving???? :(

Chapter 41

"“Our last night together,” Jackson finally announced, flexing his hands and not removing his gaze from the moon."
oooooooooooooooohhhhhhhhhhhhhhh nooo

"“Tell me what you’re feeling then,” he requested with a slight, lazy smirk on his face."
that should be tricky;p

"“A broken heart….” He repeated whimsically to himself. His head fell back against the tree and he closed his eyes, “I never meant to do this…”"
come on! he keeps hurting her! ;/

"Completely crushed and feeling as if there was no point in trying anymore, I clambered to my feet."
well...you sure affected me with this;/

okay...I've been reading the kissing scene and its amazingly good...I mean, I can feel what she feels.
weird thing is that Im listening to "just tonight" by The Pretty Reckless....the lyrics fit too well thats its upseting!

Chapter 42
If he says "no"...he will Fall. That's how things are.

"But he was the opposite. I wasn’t sure whether he always looked like this or not, but he was just…a man. He was tall and slim with sleek black hair and a dark metallic robe that made him look, well ….just really rich."
pretty or not??

usually its awesome when the vilains are beautiful...it makes it more difficult;p

hmmm! creepy!

Chapter 43

"“Maggie?” the demon king screwed up his nose, “Terra is your name, not Maggie. I had all my witches working around the clock to bring you back to me, and finally, 18 years ago, progress….”"
AVADA KEDAVRA MOTHERFUCKER!!

"“This is your unlucky day demon. You’ve run into the only angel that doesn’t follow any rules.”
I suppose he's already fallen!

"“This is a mystery. I am positive he is an angel. Maybe something more….”"

and the end????
COMEEEEEEEE ONNNNNNNNNNN!!!!!!!!!!!

NEED AN UPDATE!!!!!
:/

Chapter 29

"My eyes landed on a red headed guy in the middle of the crowd, waving an arm

casually at me."

...I smell the disaster!

"My mind was blown when I found them grinning at each other, their faces about an

inch apart. Bronco had pulled Kelly down and she was practically sitting on his

lap."
go figure

Chapter 30

well written...I almost got dizzy myself;p

Chapter 31

"“You can call me yours. I’m nobody else’s.”"
I would have died! :D

"“Have….have you been married before?”"[/i
hahah

"“Not before you, no.”"
o_O
:DDDD

Chapter 31

"“What a waste...” he said, just loud enough for me to hear it."

oh my..

"“Forget it. Just forget I said anything okay, it slipped out. I didn’t mean it,” I confessed, lying straight through my teeth."
wow, she talked about it before he did. I would expect she would have waited for him to start talking about it as she would have tried to forget all about it.brave.

"“I may be different, but the logic is still the same. I do as I’m told. If a messenger comes to me tomorrow and tells me to leave you and fly across the world, I will not hesitate.”"
nice. as if her heart wasnt already broken, he had to stub it some more.

then I dont understand why he stopped her from being with Bronco. He's very very very selfish.

"“Kiss me Jackson,” I demanded, “You can make fun of me all you want if you let me have this. If I’m going to lose you tomorrow, let me have this one thing.”"
yes. He did say that he will do whatever she asks.

beautiful chapter!

Chapter 33

"“You’re willing to manipulate me to get what you want,” he spat. "
hahaha a betrayed wife;p

"“Don’t ever put me in that situation again.”"

well sorry. jeez!

Chapter 22
OMGGGGGGGGGGGG FINALLY

Chapter 18
"“I just....don’t really know how to explain it. It’s hard enough for a guy and a girl to just be friends without raising suspicion, but when the guy,” I cleared my throat, “looks like you, it’s near impossible.”"
indeed

"“Too busy for me?” He jumped onto the bench were I was previously sitting and jutted out his bottom lip."

hahaha..Jackson has a competition!!

"“It would be so cool though...my brother and my best friend....”"
yeah..if only my best friend would say that a few years back. if only..

"“So, when should we go official Maggie? I think the world deserves to know our relationship status.”"
love him!!:P

"“You could do better,” Jackson finished."
hmf

"“Me?” I asked nobody in particular. Bronco let go of my hand and rubbed his neck sheepishly."
oh.my.god. I bet Jackson is at the door.

"My fists were clenched and I was sure that my feet were making holes in the floor as I walked."
baahaha...LETS PUNCH HIS PRETTY FACE!! kidding;p

Chapter 19

"I didn’t want any more attention....or I didn’t want people to compare me with him...I was secretly plotting how I would keep Jackson hidden, but he just kept showing up."
hmm...and maybe cuz Bronco almost kissed her?

just saying

Chapter 16

"“Alright. As of August 20th, I’m 48 years old.”"
ohh...he's young:p

its kinda creepy. I get it makes him more...human...and therefore creepy.

..but since he's not at all human...ill settle with his age;p

and I dont like going to bed with ending like this...demons in the shadows and stuff..creepy..yeah yeh i et scared easily;p

Chapter 17
"“You do need that long to get ready Maggie. You’re always late to school. I think you’ll find that if you get up earlier –”"
oh my god. I would have slaped him. even if he's an angel!

"“Is that why you told me you never wanted to see me again?” I interrupted."
yup.right to the point.

:))

Chapter 12
"It looked like a person covered in a big black sheet, with two small red cut out eye holes."
that creeped me out.

Chapter 13
ohhhhhhh I love how he talks!! He's harsh..not the usually lovey dovey stuff:p

"“I’ve been protecting you from things you shouldn’t have to see since the day you turned 18...but everything is changing. I’m not sure why there’s so many demons coming after you but—”"
dueeeeee..take it easy on her!!

"
“You aren’t in any danger Maggie, know that. Nothing out there stands a chance against me....and now that you know I’m here, I won’t have to talk to you through you mind and make you sick all the time.”

My eyebrows furrowed, “that was you making me sick?”"
smart!

"“He wasn’t real. You were unhappy and I was worried that you would do something that you’d regret, so I did my research and I tried to become someone that could make you happy again—a charming, polite man who dressed well and had an expensive car. I found that, that was something that made women happy. I borrowed the car from a friend, if you were wondering.”"
OMG!! BEST FCKING ANSWER EVER!!!!!

Chapter 14:

"“Protecting you Maggie, that’s all I’m here for. Not to watch you while you’re in the shower.”"
haha

"He rolled his eyes “No, listen with your ears. I have enough respect for you to stay outside the bathroom and to turn my head when you dress.”"
i.love.him

"“Though there was that one time when you made yourself particularly difficult to avoid....”"
hahahah!!! i loveeee him! ..ok i know i said that already;p

"
“....are you in here?” I spoke to the air, feeling a bit mental, and glad there was nobody around to witness this.

“Yes.” "
friggin creepy!

Chapter 15

I do not like Kelly. Not one bit.

Chapter 10 was awesome...I liked how the plot was going...the dream..it was smooth :)

Chapter 7

"That’s more than three dollars love,” she warned.
“He’s paying,” I sighed, pointing unnecessarily at Jackson. He smiled triumphantly."
hehe

"“Honestly, I’m not, but your pictures always make me look so....nice. Pretty and elegant and...Just...nicer that I actually am.”"
*sigh*

" Once in, I stared at him while he buckled my seat-belt for me and I didn’t like what I saw. He looked hurt, like someone had just stabbed him in the chest. He sat his hands on the steering wheel and closed his eyes."
too much twilight dose
:p

"“Trust me Maggie, it’s better this way—”"
omg i hate this. i wanna slap him!

..love long chapters:D

Chapter 3:

"
“Maggie how rude, you didn’t introduce us to your friend. Hi I’m Kelly.” Kelly swayed from left to right as she waited for Jackson to take her hand."

can I please bitch slap her now?

"“What? So being interested in Maggie’s situation is being a bad friend now?”
“No, being interested in Maggie's man is being a bad friend.”"
THANK YOU!!!

Chapter 4:
"“Is this...Jackson?” I asked, my voice wavering."
omg she asked if it was him? I would never do that...im too shy..i would have played cool instead:pp

Chapter 5:
I don't know if she should go around with a stranger, without anyone knowing.

"You look awesome today.
Love Pip"
love her. that's a real friend.

" A small crowd had formed around the car, all of them stunned by its greatness. "
I don;t really like it that he draws attention like that. I dont know, it kinda makes him look way too into himself.

"Every single person in the area’s head whipped around to face me, disbelief clear on their faces. "
DEAR.GOD.
I would have died...or become as red as supermans cape.

Chapter 6

:)

Chapter 2:

"Success."
time to see Jackson huh?;pp

" Jackson would see her in all her exotic blond glory and I would be forgotten....but that was what usually happened."
oooh!! gotchaaaaa!!!! she just admitted that she was dressing up for him! love that you didnt go into the whole "inner battle" and you just put it out there...seems more spotanious.

"“Whatever! You have to introduce me!”"
seriously??? what kind of friend are you????? $^$%^%$^$

ok..ill shut up;p

"It was. It was. It was. It was. It simply was!"
haha..nice image:p

" “Let me paint you again.”
I found myself a little bit lost, “Right now?”
“Another time.” "

yess

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just started reading this...looks promising...hopefully I'll be commenting on every chapter...that's what I always do...

can't wait to see how this is going
:))

AMAZING!!!
update soon please :D

i KNOW tht the last two chps are going to be amazing, cuz ur an awesome writer :]

I can't believe you keep on writing great things..
It's not normal.. not even a boring chapter..
not even once.. >.<
and I can't believe I'm actually falling for the demon..
Damn it.. I always fall for the bad guy...
Update more please.. It's so sad that it's coming to an end...

I LOVE the update!!!!!! But if Jackson dies, you're dead. =P Just Kiddin. Update soon!!!!!!!!

love the story