Astronaut. - Comments

*happy little contented sigh*
so beautiful. ^-^ it's wonderful!!

Lora Joan is just the cutest little thing. I always adore the chapters with her. And I love how Noah wormed the secret out of her. It's really awesome. Keep up the good work. Only a few chapters to go. *squees in excitement*

Hey look there's my banner. I think it's sweet how Lora Joan and Jupiter started out. Mama seems like such a loving woman.

I just started reading this story and I've fallen in love with it. Btw, I love Spaceman by The Killers.

I just read the first chapter, and it looks like it will be a fantastic story. I love Sunshiner by break.my.bones, it made me cry so hard. What happened to her?

So awesome. I was feeling what Jupiter felt while reading, all excited to find out what it was and then "oh a baby!" way cool. Jupiter's mother sucks. Mama - good, mother - bad bad person. *nods*

Oh, and amazing update :)
you have such beautiful and vivid description, it makes the story come to life :D

Oh my god.
Dude, I just realised that all your chapter titles for this story are the lyrics of the song "spaceman" by the killers, who are my all time favourite band. I offcially love you about ten thousand times more :)

...Asian coy fish...<--- the name of the breed of fish is spelled Koi. I don't know if what to fix that or not.

*sigh* I think that this chapter is so rich in visual describtions. It makes the world within the story more amazing.
So beautiful.

M o r e s o o n p l e a s e

This story is so wonderfully beautiful. I am absolutely spellbound. A movie could never do it justice :) I think I'll try my hand at a banner for you but if it sucks I won't send it.

Have you heard the song Astronaut by Amanda Palmer? It reminds me of this story a lot.

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happy valentine's day.

dude I loooooove this chapter. I like how you described everything and the imagery was fantastic. Plus the gypsy-man is cool as hell

Absolutely amazing. I love the way Madeline is portrayed. Every description painting her more monstrous. She barely even sounds human anymore. And the dude is just great. Very mystical. Very awesome. I think you really captured it. Excellent work.

hmm...i don't care much for the mother.
love this story so much. x]]]]]]]

Dude, You are amazing.

Aww I loved that chapter. and WOAH 34? Jeez!

I don't like her mother. She's completely self-centered. Not a care in the world as Jupiter's breaking down. She redeems herself a little in the end but it probably clicked that she was supposed to be rather than actually feeling something. She's a bad mama.

It's been great but i think you managed to recapture something with this chapter. Very wonderful. Can't wait to see the rest.

Oh.. oh... *happy sigh*
I am soooo content... His realization, and how you wrote his "ah ha!" moment... soooo beauitful...

m o r e s o o n p l e a s e

Amazing update :)
I am so excited to see how it ends, and how everything turns out. But I also want this story to last forever!

lovelovelove this.