Wings & Hearts - Comments

i liked the update. and on a side note, chapters don't have to be funny to be good. it probably would have been odd if she'd been humorous in the hospital. that said, i did get a good laugh out of imagining ville pacing to 'billie jean'

I noticed the tributes. That was very lovely of you. Amazing people. Although, MJ was a bit freak-ish, but he meant well...I suppose. Wonderful music and dancing, though =)

there was nothing more to say than what we already had, and there was almost no way to get Jyrki to the hospital without pushing him down a flight of stairs and calling an ambulance for him - and act I was ashamed to admit I had considered.
^ that actually made me laugh out loud. I think because I pictured it happening.

Aw, don't worry about posting so late. Have fun while you're gone!
Thank you so much for telling people to check out my story =)

I like how simple her first time was with no over the top glam to it. Sex is so overrated on this site anyway. It's so fantasy like -rolls eyes-

favorite line from this section:

I didn’t have to, but to me such an action was obligatory, just like the thank you notes I had in my purse for the gifts I was to receive.

anyhow, completely cute. ironic though, the Catholic school girl thing & she's dressed like it too practically. man, i'm still not comfortable in sex shops haha

totally LOVED the quick little mentioning of the previous failed attempts. definitely procured at actual audible chuckle from me, quite a feat :D

Story<3
Elvis also gets a <3

I can't wait for the surprise Jyrki has for her! Eeep!

so i think this is by far my favorite chapter yet. the hilarity of it all is just so brilliant not to mention plausible that it's simply radiant. well done, lovey :D

Well, you move quite fast with writing. I'm so jealous, haha.
The recent chapter is funny. I could clearly see Jussi in a situation like that with his hair.
Wow, I just watched Grease last night and you made that reference. Sorry, pointless info.

LOL i love the situations you put these characters through. funny installment, darling

LOVE it! hehe i have to say, i'm quite impressed with how often you get chapters up as well. definitely something :D

Great updates!

The time pass that happened hit me out of nowhere. I was like 'wait what?" haha. It's not a bad thing. I liked the update =)

I'm so glad I stumbled upon this story, I'm hooked! I love the premise, and can't wait for the next chapter

It wasn't crap. We all go through that once in awhile. Hey, Jyrki and her? What a odd couple-if it happens, but I'm very interested.

meh, i thinks its fine. sometimes odd bits have to go in just for the sake for the story development

heh god i;'ve had days like that... so incredibly painful haha

It felt like I was less his friend than someone who had simply been swept up in his gravitational pull, and then captivated by the pulls of the other two like a rogue asteroid turned slowly into a moon over eons.

I like that line a lot. Thought you should know that :)

Have you used ciggy by the way for cigarette? My mind is forgetful.

I like this a lot. It's a bit different because I have no idea what the plot is going to be, haha. I guess what I'm saying is usually on here one can automatically tell if it's a romance (it usually is...eh) and who the couple will be. Well, this...I have no idea. I like it! Your writing style is lovely too. I like reading something that flows so well.

lovely story. i tried thinking of other names for a cigarette, but alas my mind could only produce sad, little names

anyhow , i'm subscribed :mrgreen: