An Arranged Marriage To The Mafia...? - Comments

  • Violent Fetish

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    Fuck, love. You never seize to amaze me.
    But, of course you know this.
    Something brilliant, and equally tragic happened and this concerns you.
    So it turns out i wasn't actually subscribed to your story which is insane, because i've loved this story from the beginning, and you know this. So i have gone without your story for months! But the good part is, i come back and there are like, ten chapters for me to read!!
    So you better expect a comment every chapter now bitch.

    ....and i bet you don't even remember me.
    Never fear. I remember you, my love.

    Okay so i just placed that comment on my stalking account! (Don't ask!)
    So it's actually me you should remember.
    May 15th, 2010 at 02:43pm
  • xXImperfectionXx

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    Fuck, love. You never seize to amaze me.
    But, of course you know this.
    Something brilliant, and equally tragic happened and this concerns you.
    So it turns out i wasn't actually subscribed to your story which is insane, because i've loved this story from the beginning, and you know this. So i have gone without your story for months! But the good part is, i come back and there are like, ten chapters for me to read!!
    So you better expect a comment every chapter now bitch.

    ....and i bet you don't even remember me.
    Never fear. I remember you, my love.
    May 15th, 2010 at 02:41pm
  • JamieJo

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    I loved the update, very dun dun duuuunish (if that makes any sense)
    And the song reference was awesome, I LOVE Tegan and Sara just as much as I LOVE your story :)
    May 10th, 2010 at 11:21pm
  • StruckByLightening

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    Gosh! Talk about cliff-hanger! Great update hun! more soon please? xx :)
    May 6th, 2010 at 04:51pm
  • SuperWhoVengeLock

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    Oh crap.
    cc:
    <3
    May 5th, 2010 at 04:19am
  • xmiss.blondie

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    WOW you write amazingly and I love your story! I just hope Amelia isn't the one that dies...
    May 5th, 2010 at 03:58am
  • plug-in-baby

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    amazingggggg! love it =]
    May 5th, 2010 at 03:28am
  • izzylizzy95

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    great chapter. It's cute how he's all caring towards her now
    May 5th, 2010 at 01:33am
  • life.in.technicolor

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    oh dang... her dad's a creep, who in their right mind would run their own daughter off the road!!! Loved it, can't wait for more!!
    May 4th, 2010 at 11:40pm
  • Storm Sparks.

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    omg what dad could do that???!
    May 4th, 2010 at 08:57pm
  • talking_girl95

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    oh no
    her father is soooo horrible
    they should get married as soon as possible
    May 4th, 2010 at 08:43pm
  • Madi

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    omg it is gettin interestin. cnt wait 4 da next chp. plz write soon.
    May 4th, 2010 at 02:12pm
  • who cried wolf?

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    AHH amazing story!
    must have more!
    May 4th, 2010 at 12:06pm
  • purplebull

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    i didnt believe my eyes when i saw this update! i was sooooo happy! its very confusing though the chapter before they kiss and they happy but this new one she said she marrying a man who doesn't love her and she dont love him... ughhhhh i need moree!!
    & why were you in the hospital hope you ok!
    post moree soon!
    -thank you&come again.
    May 2nd, 2010 at 10:05pm
  • who cried wolf?

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    Amazing story!!
    Love it!
    Update soon please!!!
    April 27th, 2010 at 08:54am
  • JamieJo

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    I'm so glad you're back! I hope you're feeling well because I know your writting is doing well.
    Better than well, in fact, it was AMAZING!

    Anyways, I can't wait for the next update :D
    April 27th, 2010 at 01:50am
  • talking_girl95

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    i'm glad that a bad guy didn't end up finding her, i was soooo worried that that would happen
    April 27th, 2010 at 01:34am
  • plug-in-baby

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    woww i cant wait to see if shes okayy!
    ethans a cutie =]
    April 27th, 2010 at 01:13am
  • Veyo

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    WHOOO AN UPDATE AND FEEL BETTER
    April 27th, 2010 at 12:46am
  • SuperWhoVengeLock

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    Hospital? Why? Are you ok?
    Great update by the way.
    cc:
    <3
    April 27th, 2010 at 12:15am