Hold Me Close, I'll Kiss Away Your Fears - Comments

Yay, an update! Although it was a little short, I was glad to have seen the story updated after so long.

I can't WAIT to see what happens at the party! I'm thinking that either something is going to go down between Ronnie and Sarah, or Sarah and Zack kiss. Or both! That would be frickin' sweet if Zack came to Sarah's defence in front of Ronnie and then they finally made out because of it. Ohhh yes. But now I'm just throwing out some theories. XD

I missed this story. So glad to finally be able to catch up and read the update. Poor Sarah, no one deserves that nonsense. I love the interaction between Brian, Amanda and Sarah... can't wait for more.

aww i feel so bad for Sarah, and Zack's so sweet!

Oooh happy days. An update.

I feel for Sarah having to face her old school enemies. Silly Zack for not letting her know who he was playing. doh !

Good for Brian and Amanda for sticking up for her too - though she managed to stand her ground anyway.

Aww cute, how Zack wanted her to turn away from the window so she could see the expression on his face.

Hope you get up on your horsey soon and bring us more fluffiness xoxo

oh my lord! an update!!
I was missing this story!

Brilliant story, I love the relationships between all of the characters. Looking forward to reading more!!

OH MY GOD!!!! So freakin good!!! Please update soon!!!

ahhh he should just fuckin grew some balls and did it! but i lovecd it

Oh so close ! Aww poor Zack, he's going to be torturing himself even more now about the Hustler mag, cos I bet he thinks Sarah will tell Amanda who will then tell Brian...

I'm just loving this, can't wait for more xoxo

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I definitely enjoyed the scene alone with Zack and Sarah and how CLOSE they came to kissing! I was all o_O when I read it because I really thought they were going to through with it. And now they've come that close, I can only imagine how awkward it's going to be made for them once Brian and Amanda find out, haha. Bring it onnn. :P

Agreed hands down. Haha, they came so close... anyway, can't wait for the next chapter.

I LOVE IT!!!!! I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER

oh my lol cant wait til the next chapter :)

Haha, damn so close
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ohhhhh good chapter!
Grrrr he should just kiss her!!!
More soon yeah? hehehe

I laughed when I saw the title of the new chapter because I seriously thought the 'pornos' would have something to do with like a discussion at the dinner table with the parents, haha. That would have been sufficiently awkward but I definitely would have enjoyed reading it. :P I actually would have liked the dinner scene to go a little longer, but I have a feeling you might come back to that later on.

I definitely enjoyed the scene alone with Zack and Sarah and how CLOSE they came to kissing! I was all o_O when I read it because I really thought they were going to through with it. And now they've come that close, I can only imagine how awkward it's going to be made for them once Brian and Amanda find out, haha. Bring it onnn. :P

Sorry I've not commented in a while. Personal stuff has taken over and consumed me.
Anyhoo... just loved this. Poor Sarah is getting all worked up, meeting Zacky's family. Oh I really hope it goes well for her. His mum made her feel at ease, let's hope when his dad arrives, it goes ok.

Love this xoxo

He probably don’t some killer party to go to, or something going on with his friends.

I think you meant had, but if I'm wrong, forgive me. I thought that was a super sweet chapter and the way you described his mother was beautiful. I'm guessing things will heat up in the next chapter. I can't wait either way!

Eeep!! Loved it.
Zacky is just too adorable in this story...it makes me want one!! Tee hee. Hell, I wanted one before this story but your story just makes it clearer. A Zacky in people's lives would just make them heaps better!!
Can't wait for more love!! x

Oohhh it's getting juicy!! :D

First she finds out Zack likes her and doesn't know how to act around him, and now she's meeting his family! I predict things are going to spice up BIG TIME in the next chapter. Can't wait to see how that all works out. <3

ohhhh shes meeting the fam!
i love this!
update soon! cause i missed this story!