Hold Me Close, I'll Kiss Away Your Fears - Comments

Wow, it's alive and I loved every word of it! I'm not sure if you caught some of the coding mishaps or not (I'm not trying to be a jerk, I just thought I'd tell you), but there may be some text you might not have wanted italicized. And my gosh, the kiss was perfect. I'm always wary whenever Laney opens her mouth, it generally means trouble. Seriously Amanda, the chapter was awesome.

Oh, how complicates it is to be a teenager...and I can say that with the wisdom of a 22yr old!! Tee hee.

I loved the update ducky!! Awesome stuff as always :-) x

Oh my gosh. I LOVE this story. I just found it and I can't get enough.

argh uh nuh.. you can't leave us hanging there woman !

Lacey = queen beetch. Nasty piece of work, I don't like her scheming ways
Sarah = confused as heck. How will she react to the kiss, I wonder ?
Zacky = drunk as a skunk and will probably not remember what he's done

Me = needs more please xoxo

ahhhh he kissed her! ;D
i wonder how she'll take it!

Oh wow... haha, I love how you ended it there. I wonder how Sarah will react, and what will go down with Laney. I loved this!

what thats how you leave us come on update please i need to know what happens...

Ahhhhh no! I can't believe it ended there! And after all this time of waiting to see when they would kiss... that's just so cold, Amanda. Haha.

Can't wait to see what happened after their kiss though. Whether Sarah will be offended or not since Zack was drunk when he kissed her, or what's going to happen with Laney and her friends.

ohmygodd! he kissed her!?!!?! and laneys such a bitch! she deserves to die, in hell. sorry, but im rather rash when it comes to btiches.

OH MY GOD! Finally! Ooooo! I'm so flipping excited for the next update! Please update soon!

Pretty much staring at the screen a little bug-eyed!! Tee hee. I can't believe you ended it there!! You're actually killing me!! =D
Can't wait for more lovely!! x

Aww sweet lol :) Uh-oh, I think trouble is on its way!! Please update soon :)

Ok, I know this only the first time I have commented and I am so freaking sorry for not commenting before, but you must update soon! Man what a way to end Chapter 21!! I really love this story, girly!! As do I with all of your stories!!

urgh. Ronnie sounds like such a douche bag.

Poor Sarah. She picked up on his vibe straight away and I don't blame her for being a little snappy with Amanda. I hope she doesn't have second thoughts and will go to the party. Fingers crossed that nothing embarrasing happens.

more please xoxo

grr you shouldaa put the part scene in there!>.< i wanna know what happens!:D update!

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I can't WAIT to see what happens at the party! I'm thinking that either something is going to go down between Ronnie and Sarah, or Sarah and Zack kiss. Or both! That would be frickin' sweet if Zack came to Sarah's defence in front of Ronnie and then they finally made out because of it. Ohhh yes. But now I'm just throwing out some theories. XD

I agree with Cat, something is definitely going down at this party. Both would be pretty awesome actually. Heh, =)

Epic story. Update soon(: !

LOVED IT!!
I'm hoping something happens between Zacky and Sarah at this party or I'm gonna have to throw a hissy fit!! =D x

Good update! Worth the wait lol. I think maybe something very bad is going to happen :/ Please update again soon!!

awwww i miss this! D:
hahah ohhh a party! ;D
more soon soon soon!