Hold Me Close, I'll Kiss Away Your Fears - Comments

Bwhaha, you have no idea how hard this line: Sarah could see what appeared to be a younger, less attractive version of Zack lying back on the couch made me laugh. That's exactly how I'd describe Matt, too. ;)

I loved the whole scene in the bedroom where he decided to clean his room just because Sarah was there...perhaps to impress her? Maybe? lol.

It was totally cute when he played guitar and sang for her. I didn't see that coming, I just assumed he'd put on a CD. It was totally cute though. ^.^

yay an update! lol
I loved how zacky played a song instead of just playing a CD. way more romantic! :tehe:

i seriously love this story! that was an awesome vhapter! more!

aww love this story! more! **subscribes**

awww they are way to cute together!!
ANd now they are spending time together at night! ~~ lol

Okay, that was adorable, Mandy. The phone conversation with Zack had me smiling like a Chesire cat... eek. Haha, can't wait for the next chapter.

"You're never wanted me to stop before," - you've instead of you're.
Sarah liked the sounds of that. - drop the s and its perfect. ;)
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This whole chapter basically summed up my feelings about technology.. and my old computer that shit itself a year ago, forcing me to get this one. Yeeeah, haha. But yay, for more Zack and Sarah action in the next chapter! I'm disappointed it didn't happen in this chapter.

Okay so I'm still totally in love with this story!!
Loved it!! x

Absolutely cute. The ending part while she was on the phone with Zack made me smile. I can't wait to read the next chapter you post =D

Ohhh, I cherished this one alright. lol I can't wait for the next one 'cause it's gonna have more Zacky/Sarah action! Yay! Sarah's little chat with you was very funny. I couldn't stop smiling! I'm glad they were 'totally fucking' 'cause then Sarah wouldn't have got the chance to call Zack! Yay!

I'm glad you updated before the move! I cannnottttt wait for more! Happy moving, darling!
--AJ<3

Awesome update!
Alone with Zacky ;]

Off to read The King now xD

just so sweet. I'm glad that Sarah felt comfortable around Brian. It's not easy meeting new friends.

Zack and Sarah are just perfect for each other

hope your move goes ok xoxo

The blushing scene was adorable Mandy! I loved it, =)

"Oh! I've probably go a baseball or something in my car. Totally lame, but it's something." - got instead of go?
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The last part of the chapter where they were looking at each and blushing made me go 'awwwww', big time! And when you were describing how they're both kind of unsure about their feelings for each other...totally realistic. :D

They need to get together like NOW!!

Wooooooo!! Loved it!!
Seriously though....Zacky needs to man up and just jump the girl =D x

I really adore this story. Your writing is great, and I like how you just don't rush into things like a lot of other people seem to do.

I honestly cannot wait to see what unfolds. =]

-subscribes-

Aww that was such a cute chapter, lady! I loved the little football throwing part. Can they get together already!? They really like each other, what's stopping them!? Pleasseee?
Awesome job, once again!
--AJ!

Haha, love the conversation between Zack and Amanda... a make-out session? Oh my, hah. I think it's so sweet that Zack thinks she's cute, I see a romance in the making, =)

Your bleeding to death could've caused a big problem, who would write this story if your cat ended up ripping your jugular out? Not good at all!
On a happier note, the update was brilliant as always!! (: