Sooo I totally meant to comment on this ages ago when I first read it but I completely forgot. Okay, so can I just say that the scene in the supermarket was so adorable! Brian acting all domestic like that was just super cute stuff. Plus Jen's first meeting with the family was really sweet as well with how welcoming they all were, especially Brian Snr.
Ahhhhhh I can't wait to find out what happens next!
THESE TWO! I love these two. They are basically perfect and I want everything to be just like this forever. It probably won't but still. I wish it. PLEASE DON'T TAKE SO LONG TO UPDATE AGAIN OKAY.
Awww, Jen is just adorable! The dialogue about the photographers was good because it made the story a little more realistic. And her meeting the family was perfect. Bravo Mandy, bravo!
Youve had this for a while?! How dare you hold out on me like that, u KNOW i love this story lol. Well i really liked this chapter, she's meeting the fam, it's serious!! Cant wait for the next one xoxo
I love this story! I like that Michelle here is not a bitch like in 90% of the fan fics, i love her relationship with Brian, and the moments like in the beach<3 awe! Update soon xx
Oh my goodness! I loved this first chapter. It's well written, the grammar is fantastic and you have portrayed the characters extremely well. I've only read the first chapter but this is defiantly a story that I will keep reading. Please, keep updating because this story is amazing!
This was an adorable chapter. I loved how Gen was uncomfortable at the thought of touching or kissing another guy because she loooooves Brian so much, haha. It's the cutest thing ever. And they had such good chemistry together when Brian eventually joined her for the video and was kissing her while she sang. I'm glad that they're in the moment and happy with each other's company. Ooooh, it just makes me smile REAL BIG to read that cutesy stuff. :)
I really love this chapter. I thought it was so adorable that Jen couldnt let Bentley touch her and then having Brian do the video insead? Loved it! I luff this story! :) xoxo
This story makes me so giddy! I just want Jen and Brian to be all gushy and gooey and live happily ever after, forever and ever, amen. They're so adorable! Love this chapter. Everything you write, I always love. It's definitely worth the wait <3
I loved the way you described everything in the last chapter, it was so picturesque. I also loved the teasing and how Jen makes him feel youthful, it made me forget about my cold for a moment. I knew there was an elephant in the room and that it was going to bring major drama with it... and I can't wait. I'll be insanely sad, but I can't wait.
I love the relationship between Jen and Brian. The way he teases her, and how she makes him feel all youthful...I just love it. Though I'm not sure how I feel about him not telling her the full truth about his past relationship. I guess it'll come out eventually BUTIWANNAKNOWNOW! So, so, so glad you updated this! Can't wait for the next one! <3
N'yaw the way Jen was feeling about their relationship and how she blushed when he teased her was all just so wonderfully girly and cute that I almost couldn't stand it. XD
Then when Brian tried to sidestep telling Jen the truth about his past relationship I was all "OHHHH HELL NO!!" but I think that the truth is probably going to be revealed very very soon and some major shit is going to go down - and I, for one, absolutely cannot wait for it.