Awww, I loved how Jen was thinking about starting a family when Leana was going into labor. I thought it was neat how you wrote Jimmy into this chapter, showing his passion for drumming, it was adorable.
Jimmy was in this chapter!! I love the way you've written him in this story; it honestly feels like he's still here, you know what I mean? And I love how enthusiastic he is about helping Jen with the drums on her album. It is the sweetest thing.
It's totally such a girl thing that Jen is thinking about having a family with Brian already, just because Leana's going into labor. It's so cute. ^.^
Aw so presh. I really hope that bryan decides that he wants to put a special ring on the third finger of the left hand. I really do. the whole jen fitting right in is kind of unique and i love it all at once.
Nyaaaaawwww! So much cuteness in one chapter! Jen and Brian are such an adorable couple. And I love how well Jen and Michelle are getting along and she wasn't made out to be the massive bitch, being the ex and all. That is so played out. It's great how accepting she is of Jen right away.
I really like all of this, i loved the tension between the two of them, but at the same time it got really frustrating because i saw how great she was with cami and knew that she should just go for it or he should grow a pair and go for it. Also, i love how Michelle is so nice to her and doesn't get mad that he's moving on and that her daughter called Jen Mommy. It was so sweet. Cami reminded me of myself when i was 8. It almost made me cry. I love it alot i just hope no drama unfolds or he doesn't screw things up. love it.
It has been WAY TOO STINKIN' LONG! But, of course, definitely worth the wait. I love that Jen and Michelle get along so well. And I also love how adorable Brian and Jen are. Everything's just perfect but I can't help but feel like something's going to happen to ruin it, or at least make everything all tense. Really hope not though! EXCELLENT chapter, as always <3
NYAAAAWWW! So much cuteness in this chapter. It was just so adorable the way that Brian and Jen were looking at each other throughout the whole thing.
At this point it's hard to pinpoint exactly what's going to happen next... but I'm predicting more drama for some reason. I feel something bad is about to happen now that they're all happy all of a sudden. Everything's just so perfect at the moment. I predict the stuff that happened between Brian and the girl he was with before Jen is about to all come out very, very soon. XD
Chapter 21: Awwwwww I am so happy that Jen and Brian are official now and that Zacky and Gena are married. Congrats to both of the happy couples. And I'm also glad that Michelle is happy for Jen and Brian as well!
I feel so happy after reading that chapter. You seriously made my afternoon, and it was so perfect with the teasing and the way you described them looking at each other. I seldom see love like that anymore other than my brother and his wife at their wedding. It just felt so real and was so beautiful. Gah, Amanda... I love you for this chapter!
AHA! What are the odds? I check for shits and giggles to see if I can read this on my phone and GREAT SUCCESS! It really is my lucky day :P This update was perfect! Jen and Brian are so damn adorable that I almost hate them. Keyword almost. Because I really really love them. I love this story. I love the way you write, like it's just effortless. And ILOVEYOU! Not only because you posted on my birthday, but because you're just you. So now that I have written the longest comment that I've ever left on any story (yes, feel special, it's yours) I am going to try to get some sleep before working tonight. Can't wait for the next update! <3