Haha! I love how willingly Camilla gave out the information to Jen about Brian. Isn't it great the way kids don't have filters telling them not what to say? XD I wonder just what exactly Brian has been teling her though, hmmm.. It's also awesome how supportive Michelle is of Brian and his future relationships even though they're divorced. It's nice to see the ex-wife who doesn't act like a bitter old shew. :P
Just as a side note, you misspelt Brian's name as "Bran" in the very last paragraph, lmao. XD
Chapter 15: Hahahaha XD I loved Jen's mom's reaction when she saw the picture of Brian. Damn, even Michelle is pratically encouraging Brian to be with Jen. And that was pretty sneaky of Jen to get info out of Camilla!
Ahhh I'm so happy for an update! I love all of your new stories equally, but I was super glad you'd decided to update this one first. :)
I adore how Zack is starting to play the little matchmaker for Brian and Jen. It's totally cute. I wasn't expecting that to happen but it's nice to see.
This is so creative! I never would have thought of this story plot.There's nothing on here like it. Your doing an amazing job must say. Update soon please! :)
I'm dying of frustration over here! I really thought that this would be the chapter where Jen decides once and for all that she wants to hit that shit lmao. But it was very sweet how their feelings for each other are totally in sync.. even though they both don't know it yet.
Oh my gosh, this was amazing. It's really sweet how you describe their feelings for each other, I can't wait until the moment happens for them. Lovely update Mandy.