Words I Thought I'd Choke On - Comments

Wow. Nice to have some background on Frank. Hopefully Gerard can figure out how to help him.

Yay! *claps*

awe, what did happen to our little frankie.....

I thought this chapter was great, the meaning and the importance, it showed just how much they care for frankie, it is one of my favorite parts, all because of the deep meaning it has... not boring at all!!

Excellent update, I really can't wait for the next update, and I do not think you're moving to fast...

Yayy one new chapter=) I didnt mind at all that it was a long one! It explains alot, the more info the better in my opinion. im so curious, what caused frank to stop talking?!?!? And what his father did to him, if he was the cause of it all. I wanna know right now hehe, and what frank and gerard are feeling and thinking about one another. Cant wait for more, your doing a great job, thank you for this amazing story!
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Annie

Oh my god! Frank's dad was so evil, and Gerard had every right to know! I mean, his dad is no doubt the reason for Frank's mutism? I think that's the word, but I want Frankie to tell Gerard what happened, to make him better! Frankie!!! Aww Frankie's so adorable, it makes me smile to see how much Gerard cares about him...

More soon please??

I really like this story so far. I'm a new reader!

I'm kinda afraid to find out what Frank's father did to him, but I hope Gerard can help him.

KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK! <3

You truly have a gift. This is one of those chapters that explains a lote, but we all still know so little. Thos are the best kind. They keep us waiting, wanting for more as always.

And i think your pace is perfect. I always look forward to these updates, and you just made my day! =D

Write on!

this is amazing.I love it.Please update soon ^_^

I write one chapter at a time.
I do this because if I wrote it in full and kept posting the updates, I would definitely start changing my mind about certain things but be unable to go back and modify them.
I always find errors and things I don't like about my ideas/plot, so this way I can properly map out what will happen and why, but still have the option to change it if I wanted to. I could do this otherwise, because even changing little things could cause continuity errors or contradictions.
With the system I have now (although it takes longer to update, and I'm sorry about this), I still have a lot of options and choices as to where to go with the story, even though I've got the gist of it planned out.

This probably didn't make sense, but it does when I think about it. :XD

Thanks for the comments, guys, and hopefully I'll have an update ready shortly. No promises though - I'm still not exactly in a routine with my updating. :?
You guys are awesome. :D
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Oh wow! this story is awesome! update update update! have you written the story in full yet or do you write one chapter at a time?

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Oh! I love this story=) youre such a great writer, and I can wait for more updates. I really like the way you describe Frank, you are really good at that, he seems to be so innocent and sensitive, I just wanna take care of him. Good job=)
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Annie

1st of all, your writing is wonderful, especially for a 1st story and 1st Frerard.
I love how innocent Frank is, he reminds me of a little silent puppy that just wants some lovin'
I also love Gerard, the way you made him so empathetic and real is wonderful, he's different and he's very smart in his own way.
I hope you can update soon, this is wonderful.
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Awe that was so sweet!!

Except for poor wittle Frankie-Boo, I wish I could totally go ninja toast jui-juitsu and that gangs ass and make them pay *evil giggle* That would be awesome, but sadly, the toast is on vactation so I can't....

I loved the update, the hug was so sweet, I hated the fact that Frankie had to go through that, the poor boy, awe. I feel so bad, yet so happy cause Gerard made him feel a bit safe....again AWE!!!

Okay, well personally, I think you're doing well with making Frankie innocent and naive, it's working really very well and Gerard I'm finding to be very...caring towards Frank.

More soon please? I love this story

I Loved It, I Actually Nearly Cried >.<

I almost started to cry, feeling Frank's pain. He does seem very young, and innocent. He's definitly taking on the 'kicked puppy' role well. The way he accepted Gerard's embrace though, that made me smile. Frank's not thinking about what's right and what's wrong, professional or unprofessional, either of their sexualities, he just knows what makes him feel safe and that's Gerard. I loved that. And i love this story! I really hope Frank gets to see that he is worth it, worth something, and that Gerard helps him realize that!

Aww. Frank is so sad! Poor Frank! Btw you're doing a good job with Franks characeter. I really feel his sorrow... Im gonna cry! Aww.

Love, love, love the story. I am so subscribing. Don't be so worried about your writing, its great.

Thank you so much for the comments, guys.
You have no idea how much your support means to me.

The update *might* be finished within a couple of days ~ I am at least halfway through writing it (maybe more). No promises though, I can't afford to make them. :XD

Thanks, again!
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You're a really good writer :)
And I like this.
Update? Pretty please..