Words I Thought I'd Choke On - Comments

Really, if you stopped this story i'd be sad. I would understand but as i read it, i fall in love with it even more! It's grown to be one of my favorites!

awe Frankie, finally! open up to Gerard! YAY! but poor Frankie boo, he got hurt *pouts* I kinda feel sorry for his mom, but then again not really...

This was a great update...

Haha, that was my name there! Hee Hee

Aww and I'm so glad Frank's starting to come out of his shell a little bit, I mean it will take a lot of time obviously, but I'm glad he's starting too :D

More soon please?

I Just Found This And I'm Hooked! I Got To Chapter Four And I Was Like ARGH There's No Number Five! Lol

I love what you have written so far. I enjoy reading about Frank's feelings and emotions. Can't wait for more. :)

this is soo amazing - and i think the fact you write ssuch deep feelings helps reader belive that he really is on his own and that kinda helps with the mute thingy all together i love it 5* xxx

I really like this. It's very detailed and descriptive, which makes it easy to feel like Frank.
It's real good! Please update soon? :D

I think the actions go really well with the emotions, I really enjoy reading how the character is feeling :D

I think the way you're writing is great! I think you have a perfect ballance, actually. In my opinion there should be atleast a little bit more of a thought process than anything else. If it's in first person and who ever's point of view we're looking at you know to know what they're thinking and their feelings. But you didn't leave out physical action. 'He clutched his books to his chest as he breezed down the hallway...' [it's not exact i don't think, just remembering...] I think that's perfect!

Love it! <3

I think that thought is really good, but a little more action here or there wouldn't hurt, but the thoughts are really nice, they make the story more real, I really liked this story!!!! The last chapter was amazing, but poor little Frankie Boo, I hope Gerard is not acting or else I shall kick his ass(like I would ever hurt Gee)
XD

Your writing is amazing! I can't wait for the next chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

really like your sotry, and dont worry about the last chapter it was great!
more soon, okay? :D

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Gerard seems like an excellent therapist - he truly cares.

Yeah, he is actually based off my own psychiatrist. Many of the things Gerard has said are adaptations of what my therapist has told to me in the past. ;)

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Thanks, guys. :XD
You're all so sweet.
:hug: :arms:

I loved this update! Gerard seems like an excellent therapist - he truly cares. When I read what Frank wrote my heart just melted! Can't wait for more.

Great chapter! I like how they're slowly figuring eachother out!! Can't wait for the next one!! =]

(oop, and thanks for the shout out too!)

Yay thanks for the mention :D

And I'm glad that you updated, it cheered me up.

I was just as egar to know what Frankie said as Gerard was!

More soon please?

Oh thanx for putting my name out there=) such joy to read new chapters=) this story is great, and I cant wait to see how things will turn out for Frank, and Gerard of course. <3 Annie.

You're doing a Brilliant job so far! And your writing? Hun, you have nothing to worry about! You know how to write! I can't wait for more!! =]

Thanks for the mention, I really enjoyed the update and I feel bad for Frankie but I like the way you portray the emotions around them both it feels like Gerard and Frankie have this...unknown connection and they havent realised yet?

Can't wait for the next update! :D

Thanks for the shout out. Really enjoyed the update. I really feel sorry for Frank. He wants to get better but just doesn't trust himself to let go. I will be interested to see what he writes for Gerard.

Hello there! wow I really want you to continue with this story, I want more! hehe, its a great start and I love they way you describe how Gerard see Frank. I shall subscribe now.