Crayons - Comments

To tell you the truth, I've been reading this ever since chapter one was posted but, for some reason, I never posted a comment. I sincerely apologize for being a terrible reader who gave no feedback. However, I would like to please request another update because of how much I absolutely love this story. It's such an amazing breath of fresh air and it's so nice to see such great characters appear on Mibba. <3

Please update soon! :-)

Oh my god, this is the sweetest thing I've ever read (: keep the updates coming ^_^

I was..so surprised to see this updated XD Good job! Haha

I miss this story :(

I still love this story. I can't wait for more

I forgot to read this when I got the notification so this comment is sort of late but holy crap that was awesome. I want more =[

Wow! This was absolutely, without a doubt, an amazing update! I'm pretty sure I know what's going to happen, and if I'm correct, I would be mortified if I were her! She's possibly getting her period while she's in the presence of two boys. One of those boys being her teacher that she feels all self-conscious and nervous around.

Also, the way you write how Emily acts, and how she writes things, is beautiful. You're doing such a great job with it, and I'm stunned. Normally things like that bother me right away and I cringe and just can't stand it, but the way you do it is great.

Keep up the good work, and I'm really looking forward to more! :)

Wow! Fab update!
I can't wait until the next one.
Bitch, you better update again soon ;)

Holy crap, I love this.

I'm not even bothered by the pieces written by Emily, since it's a huge part of the story. I'm usually annoyed with things like that right away.

I've only read up to chapter three so far, but thusfar I'm really impressed. The idea is just so original, so fresh, and there's just something about the way you write that makes it very, very entertaining.

I love this, and it's just...it's adorable. I love how I can't see the entire plot line, also - usually, I can figure it out right away, but with yours it seems to be different. I hope you update soon. Seriously.

Oh God...I just got a thought; what if she got her period, thus explaining the stomach aches, but she got it at half-day school. Oh, dude...please don't do that to her! That'd be beyond embarrassing! Especially because of Adam! D:

I'm going to guess that's she's either pregnant of got her period and that he's getting laid :file:

awww she likes him... i cant stand quills mum ... really ahe needs to get her act together...

CUTE STORY!!! I LOVE IT!!!
xoxo =D

Wow
I love this story already!

I feel so sorry for Emily but she needs to understand that Adam is im charge of Quill aswell now.
Quill's mother's a bitch! Seriously, I'd slap her!
I enjoyed this update
Can't wait for more :arms:

The way Adam contradicts himself is amazing
We get a glimpse into his mind
The way he knows he shouldn't find the things she does cute
The way he hates that he loves touching her
It's a recipe for a great story :cute:

The start of this update made me grin sooo much.
Teachers aren't meant to hug students...
My form tutor's awesome though, she hugs us but then again, we're her babies asshe's always telling us :tehe:

So cute<3

But once Emily hits 18 it's legal for her to be with her teacher [/sohasn'tlookedthisupforherself]

Just so you know
I won't be on the internet for the first two weeks of August as I'm on Holiday
I will catch up on story updates, I promise