Awwww! I kept saying it all chapter long. I loved her waking up with Sidney, not knowing if any of it was real and feeling like it might have been a dream. Sid was so sweet too, being worried that she'd regret kissing him. Awww. “Right, Sidney. Somewhere between making out and sleeping you screwed up hardcore. Nice job.” -- Real progress on her part to be able to tease him about this.
The Sid/Max fight was funny, and I could totally picture Jordan Staal the way you described him as a toddler tattling. It is so weird how guys can do that, be mad, beat the shit out of each other and then go for beers. Girls could never do that!
My favorite part was the end, with Sidney telling her that she'd change him. “Because of you, I’ve never felt so…” “Alive?” “Happy to be awake.” - That was my biggest Awww moment of the chapter.
I so missed this story. Than you for the update. Please don't for get us and give us more soon!
So I absolutely adore this story. I love how Manda is so head strong and defiant, compared to Sidney who's as eager as a Golden Retriever. I love hoe they didn't know each other, but they grew attached almost instantly. It's like big rollercoaster of emotion, perfectly portraying the grieving process while trying to find a light. Great job! Update soon (:
i never in a million years expected max to be the one that kissed. whaaaat?! such a twist! loved it! and while i was a bit confused through the whole thing - Jordan explaining what was supposed to happen and whatnot - i still severely lived this chapter.
FINALLY! something happened between them! even if sidney acted like a 13 year old with his first kiss, who caresss!!! something physically happened between amanda and sidney. yes. yum.
i for real, can not get enough of this frickin' story.
I'm finally at ease. Not knowing who was kissing Amanda was driving me nuts! I'm kinda mad that it was Max, but now that she and Sid kissed at the end made it all better. :)
1. I loved the shoutout at the end, thank you. 2. I LOVE YOU EVEN MORE! 3. This update was amazing and I definitely liked the different writing style, it was very cool. 4. I swear though, if you leave me hanging after one more kiss you will have some serious hell to pay woman. 5. I think that just about covers it.... 6. Can't wait for the next update!
I so loved this chapter, and I think she is so going to jump him. Which I am really looking forward to.
Now you really need to ease my mind and tell me that the lips on hers were actually Sid's. It would be a mean joke if it was Max or Jordan. Not that their lips would be bad, but not here and now.
Gahhhhh I love this so much! probably too much, actually. I love this kind of hidden sexual tension between amanda and sidney. I guess it's not super hidden, but you don't out and out tell us it's there, which is great. FINALLY something happens between them! They kisseddddd! I might have squealed when I read that... (: I can't believe it's only been 15 chapters! I feel like it should be 639264 because it's sooooooo good!
So... Alex is definitely a d-bag. :/ But I loved this chapter, per usual. I just adore sidney and amandas relationship. How it's been so sloooowww, but I getthe feeling it's kinda picking up now (; Can't wait for more!!!
I can't lie (not that I ever lie to you right?), I totally want her to jump him. That's what makes this story so good! It's like the anticipation is half the fun. Love this so much.
I hope life gets easier, and I'm glad you updated this story anyway. :D Love your stories, especially this one! (and Retaliator too).
I loved her waking up with Sidney, not knowing if any of it was real and feeling like it might have been a dream. Sid was so sweet too, being worried that she'd regret kissing him. Awww. “Right, Sidney. Somewhere between making out and sleeping you screwed up hardcore. Nice job.” -- Real progress on her part to be able to tease him about this.
The Sid/Max fight was funny, and I could totally picture Jordan Staal the way you described him as a toddler tattling. It is so weird how guys can do that, be mad, beat the shit out of each other and then go for beers. Girls could never do that!
My favorite part was the end, with Sidney telling her that she'd change him. “Because of you, I’ve never felt so…”
“Alive?”
“Happy to be awake.” - That was my biggest Awww moment of the chapter.
I so missed this story. Than you for the update. Please don't for get us and give us more soon!