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  • PensRock

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    Awwww! I kept saying it all chapter long.
    I loved her waking up with Sidney, not knowing if any of it was real and feeling like it might have been a dream. Sid was so sweet too, being worried that she'd regret kissing him. Awww. “Right, Sidney. Somewhere between making out and sleeping you screwed up hardcore. Nice job.” -- Real progress on her part to be able to tease him about this.

    The Sid/Max fight was funny, and I could totally picture Jordan Staal the way you described him as a toddler tattling. It is so weird how guys can do that, be mad, beat the shit out of each other and then go for beers. Girls could never do that!

    My favorite part was the end, with Sidney telling her that she'd change him. “Because of you, I’ve never felt so…”
    “Alive?”
    “Happy to be awake.”
    - That was my biggest Awww moment of the chapter.

    I so missed this story. Than you for the update. Please don't for get us and give us more soon!
    November 14th, 2009 at 11:11am
  • kare_bear

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    new reader!
    LOVE it!
    can't wait for them to do the dirty!
    rawr @ possessive/jeal sid!
    can't wait to get my subscriber email for this one!
    November 12th, 2009 at 03:18am
  • Josie.

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    So I absolutely adore this story. I love how Manda is so head strong and defiant, compared to Sidney who's as eager as a Golden Retriever. I love hoe they didn't know each other, but they grew attached almost instantly. It's like big rollercoaster of emotion, perfectly portraying the grieving process while trying to find a light. Great job! Update soon (:
    October 29th, 2009 at 09:45am
  • scute

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    well, shit.

    i never in a million years expected max to be the one that kissed. whaaaat?! such a twist! loved it! and while i was a bit confused through the whole thing - Jordan explaining what was supposed to happen and whatnot - i still severely lived this chapter.

    FINALLY! something happened between them! even if sidney acted like a 13 year old with his first kiss, who caresss!!! something physically happened between amanda and sidney. yes. yum.

    i for real, can not get enough of this frickin' story.
    October 21st, 2009 at 12:51am
  • Jessica;

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    Dammit, Max.
    Enough with being a manwhore.
    The end was so perfect.
    Why do you write so perfectly?
    More soon. <3
    October 20th, 2009 at 11:22pm
  • dreamerforever

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    I'm finally at ease. Not knowing who was kissing Amanda was driving me nuts! I'm kinda mad that it was Max, but now that she and Sid kissed at the end made it all better. :)
    October 20th, 2009 at 08:59pm
  • PensRock

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    I knew it. I knew it wasn't Sid. Max is a bad, bad boy. Not a bad kisser though it seems.

    I think the angst between her and Sid is so appropriate and the awkwardness is so realistic. Damn you can write!!!!

    Thanks for the kiss FINALLY, but now I'm hanging again. You're torturing me!
    October 20th, 2009 at 08:21pm
  • lynne1988

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    At first I was like "OMG IT WAS MAX?? Heyyy Max...er, I mean...Bad Max! Bad, Bad Max!"

    Lmfao. Poor Sidney. Feeling all...confused. But seriously, poor Amanda, because SHE was BLINDFOLDED. I would have been like What the FUCK.

    But HEYYYYYYY. THEY'RE KISSING!!!!!! =)

    Omg. Heh. SO EXCITING!!! I can't wait for the next one. And the LULz/good times ahead. YESSSS.
    October 20th, 2009 at 05:44pm
  • layna loves her caps

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    1. I loved the shoutout at the end, thank you.
    2. I LOVE YOU EVEN MORE!
    3. This update was amazing and I definitely liked the different writing style, it was very cool.
    4. I swear though, if you leave me hanging after one more kiss you will have some serious hell to pay woman.
    5. I think that just about covers it....
    6. Can't wait for the next update!
    October 20th, 2009 at 04:17pm
  • throw your roses

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    finally! haha
    great chapter :)
    October 20th, 2009 at 03:58pm
  • Jessica;

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    Oh Max...he's funny.
    And please let those be Sidney's lips on hers and not that creepers.
    More soon. <3
    October 19th, 2009 at 12:10am
  • PensRock

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    I so loved this chapter, and I think she is so going to jump him. Which I am really looking forward to.

    Now you really need to ease my mind and tell me that the lips on hers were actually Sid's. It would be a mean joke if it was Max or Jordan. Not that their lips would be bad, but not here and now.

    More, More, More.
    October 18th, 2009 at 11:24pm
  • sonya6w

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    Why would you leave the ending like that?!!?!?!? You're definitely killing everyone here!
    Can't wait for more :)
    October 18th, 2009 at 11:10pm
  • lynne1988

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    [i[I was thinking of telling him you're in love with someone... Living. Brown eyes, dark hair, dorky laugh a total kid...

    DORKY LAUGH. Lmfao! I love Sidney's dorky laugh, hahahaha.

    AND OMFG. I CAN NOT BELIEVE YOU LEFT IT THERE.

    You're killing me, Smalls.

    UPDATE SOON!
    October 18th, 2009 at 09:36pm
  • dreamerforever

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    Don't leave me hanging! Ah!! This is going to drive me crazy until you update again!!
    October 18th, 2009 at 08:01pm
  • layna loves her caps

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    Um... what?!
    There is no way you can just stop right there.
    This isn't very funny anymore.
    October 18th, 2009 at 06:27pm
  • mzblaue

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    I love this story soo much!!!
    Fabulous job!!!
    Keep it up!!! I can't wait for the next chapter!
    October 18th, 2009 at 03:28pm
  • scute

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    Gahhhhh I love this so much! probably too much, actually.
    I love this kind of hidden sexual tension between amanda and sidney. I guess it's not super hidden, but you don't out and out tell us it's there, which is great. FINALLY something happens between them! They kisseddddd! I might have squealed when I read that... (:
    I can't believe it's only been 15 chapters! I feel like it should be 639264 because it's sooooooo good!
    October 18th, 2009 at 03:13pm
  • scute

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    So... Alex is definitely a d-bag. :/
    But I loved this chapter, per usual.
    I just adore sidney and amandas relationship. How it's been so sloooowww, but I getthe feeling it's kinda picking up now (;
    Can't wait for more!!!
    October 6th, 2009 at 02:08am
  • PensRock

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    I can't lie (not that I ever lie to you right?), I totally want her to jump him. That's what makes this story so good! It's like the anticipation is half the fun. Love this so much.

    I hope life gets easier, and I'm glad you updated this story anyway. :D Love your stories, especially this one! (and Retaliator too).
    October 5th, 2009 at 12:05pm