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Oh, Jonathan...
Eventually, it'll be okay.
Eventually.

Yes, where DOES that leave them?
I want to know that soon <3

Amazing. Good work love the new chapters, and you better get to reading my stories mister.. lol and send ppl to read them, I have been doing that with you ;)

This is by far the best story that I've read on a site like this in a LONG time! This is amazing! I made my friend Aaron read it and it took him a minute to stop poking holes in the plot, but then all the sudden (we were chatting while reading) he says, "AWWW! OH MY GOD! I hope Caden kills his father by the end of the story!"

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A kiss...
So cute <3
Now Jonathan has to so figure himself out, though, leaving poor Caden bewildered...
It'll be okay, though, or so I hope.

omg i love it!!!!!!!!!

HAHA, I LOVE IT. REALLY GREAT JOB ON THE CHAPTERS
I GOT A NEW CHAP OF STAKE IT. UP, checkem out.

:D!!!!!

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That was so adorable!
I think I'm going to melt....

:D

An update on this story, too?
Karma loves me today! <3

OMG. DAMN YOU. MORE

Okay, first off, you are fuckin hilarious....I love it, you had me laughing at your author's note on the frist chapter....and I have never laughed, cried, or awed so much form a story, this is like..just.....god I'm a lost for words so can't wait to read more

Cliffhanger?
I am the one that does those. Grr.
It is still amazing, and i still love it.

The adorable-ness...
It's so cute...
It's just...
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I liked the chapter but I'd much rather prefer it if you guys called Jonathan, Jonathan instead of Jon. I've never had a problem with nicknames but Jonathan seems to fit him more although Jon is just an abbrevation. This story is good though I can't help but think that Caden's point of view is rather childish.

And the whole I'll-beat-you-up-because-you're-gay that the guys did was rather cliche and predictable. I'd love it if you turned the tables and made it so the team leader was gay, and just afraid of feeling attracted to Caden. Not wanting to admit to his pals and family. But that doesn't seem to fit into the story. And make some twists and turns in this that surprises us and I'm sure it'll be great.

Just some pointers -shrug- if you wanted them :mrgreen:. Liked the chap, dudettes.

I love it <3

Grrrr. When in the hell, are they going to tell each other how they feel. jkjk. Love the story, and i just can't wait for more.

OMFG OMFG OMFG....LOVE IT HOLY SHIT WOW, WHAT HAPPENS NEXT???

OMG!! It's so good. It's very unique, descriptive, and the beggining wantted you to keep reaading. You never loose intrest. YOu would be an amazing writer!! don't stop!