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  • TeenAgeDream!

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    Like always...Amazing
    June 27th, 2009 at 11:42pm
  • Space Juju

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    cant wait for chapter 7!
    June 27th, 2009 at 11:26pm
  • ladyvader

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    Bones Jones:
    So this is a story about a young boy named Caden, who is an emo. No laughing or sterotypes please.
    You just did stereotype him.
    Agreed.

    And just for future refrerences, you guys. You might want to try doing an original story with an original plotline. This story is so cliche. And you might want to provide a summary ABOUT then story then do a DISCLAIMER, telling everyone you're co-writing this. It's fancier.
    June 27th, 2009 at 08:59pm
  • think alike

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    It looks like a really good story :D
    keep on writing!
    June 27th, 2009 at 01:51pm
  • Space Juju

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    i hate his dad.... bastard.
    C dad is just like mine! :shock:
    June 27th, 2009 at 05:19am
  • TeenAgeDream!

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    Once again, amazing work...HIS DAD IS A DICK
    June 27th, 2009 at 02:52am
  • TwistedDeath17

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    I love the story. I totally understand how jon feels about being church and God. Keep on writing, please! ^_^
    June 25th, 2009 at 05:01am
  • TeenAgeDream!

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    Wow, I love how you and Fallen, take turns doing the Chapters, Amazing work...
    June 24th, 2009 at 09:31pm
  • TeenAgeDream!

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    Amazing,,,I love it..TOTALLY WANT MORE
    June 23rd, 2009 at 10:34pm
  • Atrox Mortem

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    This is really good :)

    Nice writing, keep it up
    XX Meegan
    June 23rd, 2009 at 10:51am
  • modern mariah.

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    So this is a story about a young boy named Caden, who is an emo. No laughing or sterotypes please.
    You just did stereotype him.
    June 21st, 2009 at 04:21am
  • JennaMariee143

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    It is amazing! Keep writing,
    June 20th, 2009 at 12:49am
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