Silence You Lost Me - Comments

ahh!! I need to wait for you to update this one too! your writing is amazing! Can't wait to see this update as well as the other one :D

<3 hope you're doing great sweetie:) and AT LAST! an update <3

ahhh!!! AN UPDATE! i love brian plan! i wish he'd come up to me without a shirt....;p

when i saw the name of the story in the email i was like i was like I REMEMBER THAT STORY then i read the new chapter, followed by rereading the rest of the story xD yes it's been ahile but im still here :) band? do you play an instrument? I am in colorguard :)

Love this story. I really like Trin but I wonder what other secrets she is hiding and when it is all going to come out. I cant wait for more please update soon!

loved it hun i would do the same to matt but id also tell him hands off XD need more soon

Loved it hun! Just like I always do <3 haha I loved how Trin got Matt back, that was great. Can't wait for more!

Another thing, then I'll be done ranting about you until you put such an asinine comment again. Seriously, you just complained about "Trin being a whore" in your last comment, A PAGE AGO! GAWD! What did she do whore-y in this chapter? Hm? Flirt with Matt to show him what he's missing? Is that really being a whore when she wants to be with Matt? Really, what did she do with Brian? He kissed her, she kissed back because she was in a very vulnerable place at that time, so she took whatever comfort she could get, even if it meant from another guy in that manner. I mean come on, I know I brought this up in my last long comment rant about your near-sighted comments, but seriously? Again? Hopefully you'll actually read this one and come to the realization, "Oh hey, this guy is right!" then I don't have to see your comments anymore where you think you know something but just don't read well enough to catch everything you need to so one thing doesn't seem like another.

Wow, you drew two rants out of me this time, man oh man.

Now I'm done. :)

Sadly I have to say grammatical errors bother me since this is a writing site even though it's a comment. Mss.CorrCorr.
-sigh- I'm tired of seeing people just complain about writing, we can chalk it up to "artist's interpretation", am I right? That's all writing is if you really think about it, so personally your one comment wouldn't bother me out of the many other positive comments this fantastic writer has received. Why is it I find one person to rant about during every couple of comments? People just don't get it, if you don't like something go write it how you want. Ugh.

Anyway...
I loved it, Matt is a douche "Mighty M. Shadows" Smfh. Trin could do better, especially since he hit her and all but it is a Shads story and all... lol.

Ahhh dammit Trin! f*ck up homeboy!
not faiiiiir.
punch him.
yell at him!
gah. Matt is like, amazing. but he hit you for freak sakes! kick his ass!

bleh. Trin needs to stand up for herself!!!

Loved the update! but Trin should grow a set and stand up for herself!
<3

sadly i have to say that she is being some what of a whore...and if she knows that her 'friend' like brian she shouldn't be messing with him

I love this like A LOT but the last two parts confused me. So Matt hit her and then she acted like nothing happened?

Welp glad to no that they are on ok terms lol

Hahaha I know this is bad, but I like the way she plays Matt. Not so sure I like what she does to Brian in the process, but hey...

I finally finished reading!
and must I say.
I
LOVE
THIS
<3

but holy balls, Matt pissed me off in the last chapter... assholeassholeasshole.
but I'm excited for the next chapter!
:D
<3

AHHHH i'm loving this:D
“She’s mine!” Jimmy defended, running to the driver’s side of my car and leaning in the window. As we all were looking at him, he leaned in and kissed my cheek then I felt something soggy.

“Ew!!! Did you just fucking lick me!?” I called, wiping my cheek as he ran back to the boys.

“What’d I tell you about that?” Matt slapped the back of his neck.

“Just a lick-full of Jimmy makes the whole world go down!” he danced, singing.

“Thought it was a spoonful of Jimmy.” Zacky mumbled, laughing a bit.

“I’ll eat your babies.” Jimmy growled, getting up in his face.

that made my life. i was laughing so hard XD

I am so sorry this took me so long to comment on! But it was wonderful! I loved it haha. Lots of hitting haha but it was great! More soon please! :)

oh shitttttt...
Zacky spoke all that I was thinking.
Damn.
Please update soon.

I LOVED IT AND I HOPE THAT YOU UPDATE REALLY SOON BECAUSE I REALLY JUST CAN'T SIT STILL AND WAIT TIL YOU UPDATE SO WILL YOU PLEASE UPDATE ASAP?? BUT ILL UNDERSTAND IF I GOTS TO WAIT CUZ YOU GOTS A LIFE AND ALL :D

omg i missed this story a shit ton. :)
i love when jimmy sang a bullet song to trin. haha
p.s matt is seriously pissing me off with his temper tantrums but its whatever. more soon?