Ivy's Song - Comments

I liked this story. The end wasn't satisfying though! I'm glad there's a sequel.

Wow, so I think I like the end...I'm not sure yet. It was definitely not what I expected at all. Like what happened to Ivy and Joe getting together? Yes I totally thought they should. But I'm glad that Nick came around for her and was her friend. And I'm not sure on what to believe regarding Mason's story. His story seems plausible but I'm just not sure. But it was a good story! :D

If you wanna send me the summary or tell me the gist of the sequel I could try to help you with a title. I'm told I come up with some pretty good ones. haha.

Hey! Thanks for putting me in the story! Sorry I haven't been commenting though, my dad left for Afghanistan a few months ago and school is adding to that stress so I don't get the chance to get on the computer much. Love the story though, and I can't wait for a sequel!!!

omj!!!! i think that Ivy should fall for Jason, i mean he has been there for her when her blood family shunned her and i think it would be sweet.......i think maybe a good idea would be that kevin finds out that ivy stole his wallet and that jason and ivy go on with their "escape plan" but they become so close to the family before they find out that they are willing to forgive them for their past!!!

i hope you liked my somewhat estranged idea and i hope it isnt too scrambled up to understand!!! keep on writting!!!

-Kayler XD

Pleaseeeee update!

Oh man! So her brother is coming to the show. Fan-flipping-tastic. I bet Jason won't be able to hold back and will go all out on her brother if he runs into him. Mason...I don't know what he did (or maybe I should and forgot:P), but I don't like him. And leaving Joe in the dark on stuff tends not to be good. Like what if something goes down at the concert between Ivy and Mason and he backs up Mason because he doesn't know that Ivy and Mason are related. Its just not good at all. I can't wait to see who it is she falls for!! Update soon!

hehe that little mmfmmm XD
loves the chappie.....like you said suspense suspense.....
as for angel's haunting...... if i had an opinion,. i would have already shared, suggested and bugged you about it ; ) but really, if i get anything good, ill tell you mmkay?
ttyl
liv

i agree with catgirl87: she should fall for joe.

for my input see above comment.....
but if u want other input:
all three joni fall for her, (even after they end up knowing about her stealing from them (that can add lotsa drama))
ivy loves all four guys but in the end the pairings are
[nice] sky x nick (or kev) ivy x jason
frankie can also have a little side story and meet a little playmate 'girlfriend'

hope i helped!!!
byez

ooh btw someone offered to translate my story into spanish!!!!!
insert eep here!!!!

mmkay byez
liv

: )

Your story is super clever.
She steals from a Jonas, and ends up living with them.
Nice, I really like it.

This is a cool story! I'm intrigued by Ivy and Jason. They are very interesting and I'm trying to figure them out. I think that Nick had some guts to confront them like that. Wow. I don't think I would've liked that too well if I was Ivy. I think that Ivy should fall for Joe. I like that story line with Schuyler and Jason, both getting jealous and whatnot. Update soon!

i dont like schuyler. at all.

although honestly, if i did there would probably be something really screwed up about me.

anyhoo. loved this chapter.

haha i'm commenting again!
loves the chapter.... and the character......
hehe i'm soooo bad (and i love the they're gonna be naughty part( :)
byez

liv

Hey, love it!!! Seriously, but I would like to try to be the new character?
Name: Erika
Talents: Singing, Writing, Math
Looks: Blonde hair with black tips, green eyes, average weight but not skinny.......haha idk what else.....um I have a purity ring?
Yeah well loved the story keep updating!!!
(do you need a last name?)

definitelyy an interesting idea. i like.

I love this story so far. :)
Please update soon! <3

yayy!! ic an audition!!!!!
Name: Bond. James Bond.
No... Williamson. Olivia Williamson. : ) But for my (hopefully future) character, she will be named Schuyler Shawn Ashcroft ( say it out loud it has a nice ring to it) (even if i *sniff* don't get the part, i still love that name!)
Talents: let's see, i can play piano, i think i sing well (my mom and sisters on the other hand...) i think i can act (ditto in the parenthesis) i took karate for a year and a half, i can't dance for my life, i have the amazing ability to stub my right pinkie toe on anything imaginable (ouch), can kick your butt on the soccer ball heading thing on wii fit, i am a closet computer nerd (or public, whatever you see fit to call it ), i have a bad habit of writing lllllloooooooooooooooooooooonnnnnnnnnnnnnnnngggggggg things ; o) (winking clown)

byez!!!!
liv

hiya iiiiimmmmmmmmmm bbbbbaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaack!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
lol
love this chapter..... why didn't ivy get the little blue hat from wet seal? ; )
jk
“Honey, is that all. I’m paying you know. Well Disney is, but that is irrelevant.
definitely my favorite line!
but technecally, aren't the crazy fangirls paying for it *looks at ice innocently while hiding true diabolical nature* teehe
i can't wait for the next chapter (you evil hostage holder!!!!!)
peeps better comment!!!!
byez
xox
liv

yay! new chappie!!!!!

mmkay, i just realized how much your idea of denise is like esme...... (i got twil-itis bad, don't i?) 8)
it's not a bad thing or anything...... just pointing it out.......
anywayz....... i have an idea for a story and i'm writing it now.......
email me plz, i need to see if it's good before posting it for the entire world to see.......

sooooo keep writing, i can't wait to see where you take this story!!!!!!!!

bee-tee-dubba-u
(thats btw aka by the way......)
go check out the vincent black shadow.......
they rock beyond words!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
srsly......
byez!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

EMAIL!!! :D :D :D :) :) :)

“I have three other big brothers. Will you be my 3rd big brother?”

aaaaawwwwwww!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
that line really got to me..... how adorable!!!!

now, what you need next is a love triangle..... a big cullen-like one

joe likes ivy, ivy lies kevin, ivy tries to woo kevin, kevin finds out about the wallet, kevin shuns ivy, ivy runs to joe, kevin realizes he was too quick to judge, walks in on joe and ivy kissing, etc...... all the while, jason (no matter how much i want him for myself) realizes he is gay and falls in love with nick. nick doesen't like jason back, after being rejected, he gets depressed and tries to hurt himself, when the family finds out abot his being gay, things get awkward....... in the end, the pairs are kevin x ivy and joe x jason..... maybe even imply some niley.........

well that's all folks

email me! tell me what you think.....

ttyl
xox liv