Andy. And Now You're Gone - Comments

waitingforsomething (100)

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I had to blink back tears with this one. That song always makes me want to cry. Just one of those songs, you know? Beautiful job.

August 5th, 2007 at 04:25am

nelicquele (100)

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That is all I have of you now. And they aren’t even you. You weren’t that. You were mine. And that wasn’t you. that line is amazing, so beautiful and meaningful.
and the story is good

this is for the cult so can you check first line in my siggy???

August 1st, 2007 at 05:32pm

Bravo (100)

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that was so amazing..
you are a great writer!

August 1st, 2007 at 03:27pm

dr. faustus (1070)

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I had watched you kiss her as she sat in her little sports car. I had seen you whisper something in her ear and I had seen her smile. That fucking whore. Smiling at you. Like you were her world.

But who was I to judge? You were my world.
“Promise me?” I asked, letting my marker fall out of my hand and smearing a black mark across my latest creation. I really loved that. I loved the way you wrote this, none the least it was amazing, and wonderful to read. I didn't see so much of spelling or grammar mistakes so that's good. Very well written.

I did this for the cult so you can read anything from mine. Click the last line in siggy. :D

August 1st, 2007 at 03:21pm