Words, Words, Words - Comments

Bawling like a little girl at that ending.
<33 I'm so terribly in love with this that I cried a bit just because it's over.
It was written so well and it's really great (:

Experimentation is the key to all good stories!

^^ agreed.
This story was fabulous.
You're a fantastic writer.
I liked how the ending wasn't super cliche.

But one question, why did you use Oliver and the rest of BMTH if you don't really like them?

I don't know whether to be disappointed or amazed at your story. I just read through the entire thing. It was beautiful and you're an amazing writer, but I was just hoping for a happy ending. Not super cliche, like they made up right away and lived happily every after, but more hopeful for a future relationship. I understand it completely, and love how realistic it was, but it just gives me that feeling you get when you watch a movie or read a book where the main character dies in the end, or (more so) when the two lovers you've been rooting for aren't together at the end. Like that one about Jane Austen with James McAvoy and whatshername. I don't know. I'm not trying to criticize you in any way, because I mean it when I say the story was amazing, but I just think such a depressing story shouldn't have had such a depressing ending. Maybe you could write an epilogue that's a few years into the future that shows both Oli and Lia really happy with other people, then they meet again and accept to be friends and everything. That would maybe be a little better. OR you could have them meet again in the future and try to love each other again. I know that second one would pretty much ruin the whole point you made with the story, but it'd be happier, and show that they could work with each other to stay happy and not hurt... Sorry, this is kind of a long, random, all-over-the-place comment... I just thought I'd share what I thought :] Once again, the story was incredible, even though it didn't end the way I wanted it to. I suppose it's better that way [:

My face still has a frown :(
I loved it.
Why does it have to be over :(

:( sad ending.... But great story! :) Just sad it's over. :o

I want to start off first by saying Oli is a prick.
Now we've got that outta the way... I thought my Thursday wouldn't get any more exciting until I got my update email for this story. I was bouncing in my seat.
But it's OVER? No, you've gotta be kidding me. Joking. Pulling a huge prank. I can't believe it! I just can't! NO!
I'm sorry for your loss at school.
I agree with your statements concerning BMTH.
And I'm gonna go and sub to John now. :)
I still can't believe it... last comment coming from me on this story too. Arg, it's so sad! :/
But I'll leave your comments page with this: It was an amazing story, it got ten stars, it's the first one you've finished, and I love it. You're a great writer, and as many times as I've said this, it never changes. You are purty good at this craft.

I love this, and as sad as I am to sad goodbye I'm so excited - like beyond excited - for the John story.

Cliche endings sorta kill a story for me, so the fact that this was based on a more realistic perspective and not a sappy 'and they lived happily ever after' one makes my smile just a bit bigger.

'- i don't like bring me the horizon's music and i'm not a big fan of oliver sykes.'
^that's so perfect. I don't know why I love reading that fact so much, but I think you're owed even more praise for being able to write something so beautiful about someone that you're not even really interested in. That's fucking brilliance if I've ever seen it.

I am really sad that this story is ending. But i also really like the whole thing and the direction it took.
And by the way that part about the therapist looking into a full length mirror and seeing all of their patients words and thoughts and stuff pouring back on them gave me chills. It was really well-written and the whole concept was just amazing. I loved it. Great chapter. :)
xox

The letters, oh goodness. That made me happy.Words, words, words, words...
I'm determined for a sappy ending, yeah? Fireworks and butterflies. Love, not lust. The whole shabang.
It's sad it's almost over. :/ What am I going to do? Read the only other fiction that's constantly updating? No, that won't do.
You're awesome, just thought I'd remind you.

the end of the story? or sequel?

I don't think I've ever commented this,
but I've been subscribed for a while, meaning to read it.
Today I had time to sit down and do so.
This story is abaolutely wonderful!
I love that you've really planned out your characters and decided how each of their mids would work.
I can tell that you understand Lia very well.
Though the plot is a dramatic topic, it's not over done, which I'm sure is hard to accomplish.
Overall an amazing story.

you better update fast or I'll die because this story is amazing and I dont know at which chapter, but I almost cried at a chapter. XD

Aha! I was right!
I can't believe it: Bulimia, now self-harm? Creative in the way you made it so it's not the whole razor ordeal. These are real problems we're talking about, and you are great at making them seem real with fictional characters (at least for the most part fictional).
Now what will happen? I'm more than hopeful for a time recuperating at a hospital or rehab facility, not the help of her ignorant friend and his prick of a brother. I want them gone, but not completely. Correspondence via pens and notebook paper seems more personal, dontchya think?
Tom should go slap Oliver upside the head for me. Please and thanks.

oh my gosh. this chapter is like, i dont know. amelia needs some help really badly. i hope she is okay because gosh that chapter made me all like O_O im glad that oliver and tom have gone to see her, hopefully help her too! update again soon. shame you are getting bored of this story! D: its soooooo good.

Oh wow.

Okay, so I'm going to be completely honest with you because I don't like bullshitting people:
It's been so long since you've updated from that one chapter that I completely forgot about the storyline, so when you updated I had to go back and read everything through.

I'm good now, though, and I have to say that I'm super duper happy you've updated.

I adore Oliver and Tom for coming over to her house and checking in on her. It was so heroic of them.

Amelia. She needs help. So badly.

I hope good things happen to her soon. Yes? No?

Either way, wonderful updates doll. I hope you gain some of your subscribers back 'cause of this.

Good news is I quit IB, so more reading/writing time is at hand!
Digging the new layout. Is it new, or am I just tripping on something?
I think that Amelia will go downhill, then all of a sudden, a rescue comes by in the form of the Sykes brothers. Yeahyeah?! Eh. I'm not creative enough. =P
Excellent update, though.

I really REALLY missed this story, so when I saw that two new chapters were put up I was so FREAKING happy that I almost fell out of my chair with delight.
And MAN OH MAN were those chapters amazing. I had tears in my eyes, especially when Amelia found her fathers picture with his secretary in the local newspaper.
I hope you update as soon as you can love! ^ ^

I absoultly adore this story.
It's amazing.
Nice work. :]

Hi! I just read all 24 chapters tonight and I must say I am IN LOVE with this story. It's seriously amazing. =D I'm excited to see what happens next XD P.S.

P.S. I subscribed :)