Words, Words, Words - Comments

Hmmmm....It makes me think you're going to start with the next chapter and have them stop....I dunno. It usually happens in stories. Lol. But I loved every single moment of it. It was just...beautiful.

Amazing update, as always.
I can't believe they're.... gonna do it.
But this of course just makes me even more excited for the next chapter.

ahhh, yay!

tastefully written.
at first i thought you were going to gross me out with some sexual shit.
but i should of known better! :P

woah!!!!
Finally they got together! :D

loving the story :) update asap.

i'm so glad they finally fucked!
i say that with smiles! :)

HOLY COW. my insides are trembling because of this amazing update.

thanks :)

Oh wow. I just read through this.
It's actually been one of the stories I've seen and meant to read because it looked good but kept forgetting to do it.
Now, I'm so glad I read it because it's absolutely fabulous.

Why no updates hun? Your story is extraordinary! Haha, wholy poop that rhymed!
I hope you decide to update as soon as possible : D
I can't get enough of this story! Lol.

Okay, so I lied about taking two days, cause I decided not to be lazy and just to get it done. : D

Summary: I love this summary because it lays out the whole story first, and then you have to go back and read all the chapters to find out what made her start her bad habit in the first place.
First chapter: You do a really good job describing her eating disorder. I like how you go into detail, not just saying, 'oh she puked.' And also, you did a good job on the character development of Oli in this chapter. He comes across as mean and hurtful, obviously directing it towards Amelia.
Second chapter: "Wha', there's not enough food on the table teh satisfy yeh?" I scoff when I see Amelia. That's so mean. But, I'm glad you use originality in your comebacks, they're witty and clever. Not just, "Your fat." "Yeah, well you fucked 89743 girls."
Third chapter: Jesus, Oli is such a jerk. :/ It's so true though, that if he stopped with all the comments, she'd quit. I know tons of people who put themselves through such torture, when if that person would just knock their shit off, they'd stop.
Fourth chapter: I wish everyone would stop acting like they didn't freakin' know! Of course she's hacking up her food in the bathroom. She's not sick. Everyone at all the things she did! Errgh.
Fifth chapter: Is Tom retarded? Did he seriously just tell Amelia to be friends with Oli? Tard.
Sixth chapter: This chapter was really short, man. But I like how Tom stood up for Amelia. Even if Oli is his brother, what he's doing is wrong, and finally Tom is taking that into consideration and confronting him.
Seventh chapter: Hahaha, I love how Tom makes her promise to come before he tells her where they're going. It makes me laugh. "Good mornin' sunshine, the Earth says 'ello!" Tom's voice breaks through on the other side. That's so adorable. (: That would make my day if someone called me and said that in the morning.
Eighth chapter: I actually really liked this car. I can relate to how Amelia feels, being stuck in such a small space with someone who she can't stand. I love how you make Oli such an angry driver in the car. His anger makes me laugh. (: "Hell, it's a miracle yeh fit in the car," I sneer. Oh God, I know this is horrible to say, but that was funny. Again, with the witty comebacks. I'll bet Oli felt like a giant piece of shit walking into the diner without Amelia.
Ninth Chapter: I really really like this chapter, because Amelia doesn't seem so extremely uptight. She drinks and lets loose a little bit, which leads her to dancing with Oli.. Ooh. (:
Tenth chapter: Mmm. Oli finally realizes that the emotion he feels is jealousy. Obviously!
Eleventh chapter: OLIVER SAID SORRY! Finally. Good God, I was about to beat him with an empty bottle of... Vodka. Yeah. (:
Twelfth chapter: I believe I've already mentioned this once before, but my favorite part: “Yeh out of yeh bloody mind, woman,” I say, shaking my head, I like how Oli is finally apologizing and explaing himself while Amelia just sits there and says, oh la de da de da. It's my fault. Moron woman. (:
Thirteenth chapter: I love how she talks about singing 'Footloose' while she's compeltely hammered. Priceless (: "Clean up, yeh look like bloody hell," He scoffs. Turning around and walking out, he mutters, loud enough for me to hear, "But what's new?" Oli just doesn't get it, does he? :/
Fourteenth chapter: I can’t stop myself from slapping my hands on my thighs, sitting up right and saying with an unpleasant smile, “I bet I’m not the only one who needs a drink righ’ abou’ now.” Hahahahaahaha. Oh God, I love that part. I love he's sitting there, listening to SJ ramble off a bunch of bullshit and he totally disagrees with all of it. I would not be cleaning up someone else's puke. Gross. :/ I also would not get in the car with Oli after he was being such a twat. “Don’ yeh dare fuck this up, Oliver.” I like that part. (:
Fifteenth chapter: This is pretty good. (: Sad though. At least Amelia finally brings to Oli's attention what he's doing to her.
Sixteenth chapter: This chapter had so much emotion in it. It was so freaking sad. Amelia's words just come across so broken and hurt. Great job.
Seventeenth chapter: They kissed. They kissed. Oh my God, what is going on!? (:
Eighteenth chapter: Yeh know, fer some reason, I'm not really liking Tom's friend. All the giggling bothers me. :/ Ah, stupid Amelia. She's still puking. She was supposed to stop, cause Oli and her are good now. Good Lord.
Nineteenth chapter: You wrote the binge scene perfectly. Completely flawless. I loved it. And I also love how you can write about the same thing twice, (ex: the phone call between Oli and Amelia) and you don't write the same exact thing. Make sense? (:
Twentieth chapter: I didn't expect the outburst from Tom at all, but I guess Amelia deserved it. Tom tried so hard to help her and it never did any good, but Oli does one little thing and she's okay? I guess Tom feels rejected? I know I would.
Twenty First chapter: Awwh, here comes the Oli charm. One kiss and it's all gone from there. Hahah.

All in all, I really really love this story. It's great. (: And I can't wait for chapter 22

I feel kinda rude, commenting this for my contest.. Cause I already read it anyways.. Hahaha.

But anywho, I really really love this story. It's amazing.

very awesome!!
made me hate/love oli
:)

Amazing : D

ohh, i really like the new layout for the story.
:]
i was just checking in to see if there was a new chapter. i don't usually check my email. :p
update soon?

fantasticness!
love it. i especially adore the part where oli seems to like the idea that it's wrong, haha.
more updates! moooorrrreeee!
*drools*

hello there hollllleh :p

As you know, i didnt get to read this chapter before it came out. which, is not bueno. hahaha but i mean, a girl needs sleep!

i know this was great, even if you dont believe me anymore. haha
you gotta update sooooon, k!
LIKE, WRITE RIGHT NOW!
ILL MAKE YA! haahahaha

Omg that was amazing!
I loved every word of it!
PLEEEEEASE update soon hun. : )

sighhh, they belong together. mhmmm the kiss was amazing!

..tom's a pussayyyy.

It was good enough, to say the least?