Words, Words, Words - Comments

She's still puking I see. WHY AMELIA, WHY!?!?!?!?!?!??!!?!??!
How could she still want to do that after what happened at that lovely tree?
I think if she's in too deep then maybe someone should get her some help. Throwing up your food is NOT okay.

Oooh. Tom's new girl. That was shocking, I wasn't expecting it.

And it's shocking that Oliver is still thinking about Amelia after three days. I wouldn't have expected it from him, although lately there have been many actions of his that I wouldn't have expected. It's coming together great though, and I'm stoked to see what's going to happen once she comes over. Especially what with the toilet flushing and all. Foreshadowing!

no, amelia! how could you?!
everytime you update, it makes meh feel bad for not updating my own shit haha
it puts meh to shame. :(

ooOOooo Tom has a girlfriend..... that was very unexpected

No, damnit. She's still throwing up?! :shock:

Can't wait till next chapter, cheers.

Loved it, as always!
AND THERE I AM GETTING IT ON WITH BABY SYKES
now you just need to let me feed him plates of toast ahahahahaha

i cant wait for amelia's POV! you have great ideas, girlfran!
update sooooon, yeah?
i cant wait!

Social lives are overrated XD just kidding

Thanks for updating!!!!! :D:D:D:D:D

yeshhhhh. keep updating!
oli and amelia are so cutee! :D

baaaaaaaaaah.
this story is so great.

I could only imagine what Tom feels. If I was him, I'd be devastated.

I was thinking the other day how awesome it would be if life had "like" buttons, as on facebook. But then I thought, it would be hard to express my love for things, such as this story.
So, what I'm trying to say is, I love this story (in case you didn't catch that at first). 8-D

actually, this is probably my favorite chapter just because you were so descriptive about their feelings.
great job, i loved it!

oh snapppp

AWWWW THEY'RE SO CUTE TOGETHER!!!!! ^-^

Unless I've already said that.... -.-

“'Take me somewhere small and empty.'

Like to his heart."

Favorite part. It just stuck in my head, for some reason.
I'm absolutely in LOVE with this story. Finally, Oliver's figuring it out. Thank God. Now, we just have to wait and see where it'll go. I'm excited.

OMFG..
They kissed
Cue the 'Ooo's and Ahhh's'
:]
Adorable chapter.
Can't wait to see what happens next.
Update when you can please (:

Blades of grass, soccer fields,
and a really fantastic update :)

Even with your writers block and my annoying 'motivating' encouragement, this chapter is great. im sure once m&s and everything is updated, oliver will definitely have some explaining to do!

Is it bad that I think Amelia is extremely overly sensitive?
She is kind of a cry baby too, haha.
And here we go, the plot just became more complicated!
What can become of this?
I can only wonder.

Definitely not too melodramatic. Just the right amount of emotion. And now that I've got you reading this, UPDATE BDEN. That can be how you celebrate getting 10 stars on this story. xD

I JUST WANT TO LET EVERYONE KNOW THAT I PROOFED CHAPTER 16 AND TOLD HER IT WAS AMAZING EVEN THOUGH SHE SAID IT WASNT

and now look, holly!

you got people crying, its so good! so ha!

this just proves that you are amazing. along with your 10 stars and allll. congrats!

SO;
UPDATE AGAIN?

yesyesyesyes pleaseee :D

Is it normal to cry at a computer screen because of a story you absolutely love?