Deadly Kiss - Comments

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I am reading the first chapter...I love it!!

I love you! You make me smile so much and even laugh. Thank you for reading and I'm glad you love it.

Wow. I didn't really think she had it in her to kill him. But, admittedly, she needed to. He wasn't going to let her go. And she was right - he didn't really love her. He loved her image, and was willing to make himself love this Ann, because she looked like his Ann. But she isn't his. She doesn't love him. One, he killed her family. And two, he's obsessed with her. There is a definite line between healthy love and joy and all that jazz, and obsession. Insanity. He smeared that line a little too much for comfort. Well, actually he smeared it way too much, but that isn't the point. He needed to realize that things weren't going to work out between the two of them. *sigh* I feel bad for him, because in this last chapter, he sort of reminds me of a little lost puppy that is so easy to become heartbroken. But he needs to let go. He needs to move on - this time, into the next life, or onto hell, or wherever. Just not earth. It isn't the right place for him when he has those memories.

This was AMAZING. And now I'm going to go read the sequel. =)

*gag* Well dip me in butter and roll me in nuts. No wonder the sick bastard is so crazy about her. Still, though. He is literally C-R-A-Z-Y. As is William. Creepers. But she isn't Ann. She doesn't love him, and she doesn't want him to hold her hand in that way, or anyway. Ew. Ew ew ew. It'd be disgusting if she did.

Wooooooow. Creepy and stalker much? They're just.... awful. Ew. That's just.... twisted? Sick? Disturbing? Horrible? Disgusting? All of the above? Hell to the yeah.

haha, NICE one! '"If you weren't so creepy, I might even date you."' I seriously laughed my arse of at that point. Love your writing, by the way. Just so you know. :)

Can I hit her? 'Cause she's a freaking idiot. You don't go and be nice to the guy who not only killed your family, but kidnapped you in hopes that you would someday grow to love him. Oh, and he lies a lot, so that's another thing to be cautious of. And UGH, I hate HIM because he's an asshat, and I hate HER because she's dimwitted. You don't even TALK to the guy who killed your family, much less date him and make out with him and act like NOTHING HAPPENED. URGH. This is quite frustrating.

*sighs* Stay strong, Ann. Remember that no matter how many nice things he does for you, it's all just an act and he killed your family. Your sister, your parents. He left you with no one. You can't go back from something like that. So don't try.

FINALLY! SHE REMEMBERS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *mutters under breath, "And it's about damn time, too. Took her long enough....."* Now, hopefully our charming little Brendie boy won't get her under his stupid spell again. Jerk.

Brendon and William = two sick, evil, sons of bastards. And what is up with Ann? How is he controlling her mind!? Ugh, I just want to scream at her, "WAKE UP!" I hate boys. I'm not dating until I am at least eighteen. So far, only one hasn't turned out to be an asshat, and he hates me, and I can't say I blame him. So yeah. Not ever going to date at all for a really, really long time. *grimaces*

I hate him. He should go get burned up by the sun, and then the rats should come out and defecate on his ashes. But that's just my opinion. I'd feel sorry for the defecation that had to be stuck on his stupid ashes, personally. And I hate rats. I think I've proven my point.

Ugh, I HATE him! He's such an asshat and a jerk and blech and he makes me want to throw up! He's............. UGH! *rips hair out in frustration* I think I need to calm down....... yeah. Okay. I'm good. He's an asshat. We know that. Moving on and reading the next chapter.

This is freaking amazing, just so you know. :)

Yeeeeaaaaaaap. Knew it. No, Ann, it wasn't little Willy that killed your parents. It was good ole Brendie! Isn't that right? *curses darkly under breath* Asshat........

So. I've been thinkin'. (Which, as you can likely guess, is never a good thing. XD) What if Brendon is the one who killed her parents? That would totally suck, but it would kind of make sense. At the same token though, I really don't want to be right on this one. Like, at all. Because that would really suck. But if not Williams, and not Brendon, who? I'm really starting to think it was Brendon though...... Hm. Must contemplate more.

OMG, HARPER'S ISLAND WAS THE BEST!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVED THAT SHOW. Freaking out right now. That show was freaking amazing. It was. Loved it. And you can watch it on fancast.com. or, at least that's how my mom and dad were able to watch it when they missed an episode because they were out of town or at work or whatever. But yeah, I looooooovvvvvvvvvvvvvvvveeeeeeeeeeeed that show. I miss it. It was freaking awesome. :) And yeah, I figured it out too, that it was Henry. Twisted asshat. Oh well. He died. And Abby and Jimmy (I think it was Jimmy. Right? I don't remember all of the names and details, I haven't seen it since sixth grade......) got together forever. Yay. I miss Chloe and Cal, though. Or what's-his-name..... Hm. My memory fails me at four in the morning. Oh well. But yeah, I LOVED that show! it was the best. XD

So..... if Williams didn't kill her parents...... who the hell did?

*cracks up* '"No! Too much cleavage!"' *keeps laughing maniacally*