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  • cin

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    I can't believe that was the end. :( I feel really bad for Jerome </3 I love your storie nonetheless
    November 8th, 2013 at 03:57pm
  • loulou.babii

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    your mean how could you end it like that .... :( . but still obviously loved it. :)
    April 23rd, 2011 at 01:20am
  • LiveLifeDrunk

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    That was a great ending. Sad, but not cliche. A sequel would be cool, to see what ends up happening... An epilogue maybe? Like, some odd amount of years into the future to show where they all ended up, but that might just be because I love this story too much and don't want it to end.
    You're a great writer, thank you for writing this!!
    January 11th, 2011 at 03:24am
  • Love.Dream.Be Free

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    I HATE YOU!!! I STILL CANT SEE BECAUSE OF MY TEARS!!!!!!!!.........but good story......i think......:(
    January 10th, 2011 at 04:29am
  • Just_QueenPaige

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    ohh man now u've got me crying and thats hard to do
    January 9th, 2011 at 06:00am
  • alexisxx13

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    I am in Lovee with this storyy.<3
    December 29th, 2010 at 09:55am
  • hiheyhello13535

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    O_O this is awesome... wonderful writer <3
    July 7th, 2010 at 06:22pm
  • Undefined;;

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    I loved the summary! It grabbed my attention.
    Its really good. =D
    June 25th, 2010 at 01:22am
  • strawberry wine

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    The story is good and their relationship is really cute. I like :)
    June 24th, 2010 at 11:45pm
  • xiluvmusicx

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    I really liked how realistic that chapter is. Very nice. Keep updating please :)
    June 23rd, 2010 at 05:57am
  • Acid Milk

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    I really like your layout! :) It's beautiful.
    I read the first chapter, and it was great. <3 Love it.
    June 23rd, 2010 at 05:25am
  • ab1234

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    I love this! :D
    I think that it's original, and I can't wait to read more!
    I subscribed.
    :)
    March 17th, 2010 at 04:22am
  • pottymouthannah

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    Well now we are both in love with this story ^_^
    haha
    seriously this is absolutely amazing
    please update soon <3
    January 4th, 2010 at 05:17am
  • TheGreatSaiyaman

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    Finally, they kiss! I liked the chapter. It's nice to know more about her family and how she was before her family died.
    November 30th, 2009 at 12:48am
  • TheGreatSaiyaman

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    Thanks for writing another chapter! I really enjoyed reading it :)
    November 23rd, 2009 at 03:57pm
  • That's What She Said

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    Blahhh.
    Terrible ending on the last chapter. >.<
    September 20th, 2009 at 01:40am
  • That's What She Said

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    Love the layout, love the banner.
    I hope you stick with it, and take all the time you need.

    Hope to see more,
    shylia!
    August 31st, 2009 at 01:53am
  • TheGreatSaiyaman

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    Huh, I never posted a commented on this!? D:
    Well, I really like this story, and I love the layout. And it's okay if you don't work on it as much, I can wait XD
    August 29th, 2009 at 02:17pm
  • aluminum foil

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    This is actually really good :)
    The plot is original, and it has some twists and turns.
    Also, I like reading from a guy's prospective, instead of a girl's.
    It's very refreshing.

    Additionally, the grammar and punctuation are very good, and it is easy and clear to read.
    Good job :)
    I subscribed! :D
    August 1st, 2009 at 10:58pm
  • That's What She Said

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    Awh, that was actually a pretty sweet chapter. =)
    Can't wait for more!
    July 30th, 2009 at 02:23am