Soooo. I started reading this yesterday. And I'm on Chapter 37 right now, and I just wanted to say that I love you for mentioning It's Kind Of A Funny Story. That's my favorite book. Yay.
I thought he was going to make some sort of scrapbook. Jagger seems like a pretty cool guy. It's nice to see Ben doing something with his guitar playing since he's so good at it. I love that Sage used the stern look on Ben when he was denying his singing ability. It's a good idea to leave the scrapbook unfinished so there is room to fill it with memories yet to be made. I'm glad they stopped before they went too far. It just would have been so out of character for them to have done it then. You have no idea how exited I am to find out that you have a new story started. I'm going to check it out as soon as I finish writing this. Looking forward to the next update! <3
Love this,it's really,really good,on the subject of sex,i think it's time for it,and a word for joint no-one has mentioned is spliff,i think i've heard someone call it a ladder before too,might be wrong though,and the only other ones i can think of have already been said.More soon please!!
I'm glad Kelly is helping Ben out with breakfast, I'm not too sure of his cooking abilities. He's never cooked in previous chapters as far as I can remember. So Sage has a few more surprises for Ben? I have a hunch as to what some of it might be but I'm not going to make any assumptions. I can't wait to find out what they are. As for another word for joint; I have no clue. I really like the name Clay. I actually used to have a crush on a gay guy named Clay. I always found it funny that he's into art, more studio art than ceramics, but still. Still loving this story! Hope to be reading more soon! <3
Joint; Blunt; Dube (Doo-be); Roach (Roach is a smaller joint, one that's been almost completely smoked). And some people call them rolls, but it's a newer name.
Yeah, totally. I'm uh..innocent. Totally. So I love this so much :)
umm...for the question of sex...the answer is YES!!!!. not only because im a fan girl at heart but i think the relationship between Ben and Sage (btw love that name) is at that point. AND I LOVE THE DIFFERENT LANGUAGES THING SO ROMANTIC!!! (im going to use that at some point in time)
I just reread this, all 73 chapters, and I'm just more impressed and in love with this story. Going back to the beginning and seeing just how much these two have grown as individuals and together is amazing. I didn't really notice it before because it was portrayed in such a way that it was just natural like in real life. You know how the people your with the most you don't really notice how they change? Not till they're around someone they haven't seen in a wile and that person points out the differences and then you realize them for yourself. That's what going back and rereading this was like. It's incredible how well developed your characters are and how realistic their growth is. Any way, I just had to say all that. Also I thought more about the sex thing. I don't see them doing it because it isn't the sort of thing that they have done in the past. I mean that that sort of thing hasn't been what you write about with them. Yah, they've had their little moments here and there but they really haven't done much more than make out and give the occasional hickey. Also they seem the type to wait for the perfect moment to do anything spatial or important and this would definitely be one of those occasions. They always go the extra mile for each other. That's just my opinion, and I'm sure that if you do decide to have them do it that you will find just the right way for it to happen. Love more with each new chapter. Hope to be reading more soon! <3 (wow, that's a really long comment!)
I loved the chapter! The path of "I love you"s was so adorable! And Sex? Well slash stories almost always has boyxboy scenes and I defiantly wont be upset if you put it in there ;) But I think the story could thrive either way! And If you do put a sex scene in it I don't think it should be a heated, lust filled, screaming orgy (Wow nice choice of words xD) I think it should be more passionate and loving!
Anyways, great job on the last 3 chapters!!! I loveddddd them!
I love your story. :D as for the sex thing.. I don't think it would be out of place if you put it in there. I mean, they've been together how long?! xD