Just Praying to a God That I Don't Believe In - Comments

  • WOw this story is really great. I think Sage is more manly than Ben is though. You had some really hilarious lines in here especially from Mason.
    April 16th, 2010 at 10:25pm
  • Soooo.
    I started reading this yesterday.
    And I'm on Chapter 37 right now,
    and I just wanted to say that I love you for mentioning It's Kind Of A Funny Story.
    That's my favorite book.
    Yay.

    Also I love your story. c;
    April 8th, 2010 at 05:59pm
  • I thought he was going to make some sort of scrapbook. Jagger seems like a pretty cool guy. It's nice to see Ben doing something with his guitar playing since he's so good at it. I love that Sage used the stern look on Ben when he was denying his singing ability. It's a good idea to leave the scrapbook unfinished so there is room to fill it with memories yet to be made. I'm glad they stopped before they went too far. It just would have been so out of character for them to have done it then. You have no idea how exited I am to find out that you have a new story started. I'm going to check it out as soon as I finish writing this. Looking forward to the next update! <3
    April 8th, 2010 at 04:18pm
  • Love this,it's really,really good,on the subject of sex,i think it's time for it,and a word for joint no-one has mentioned is spliff,i think i've heard someone call it a ladder before too,might be wrong though,and the only other ones i can think of have already been said.More soon please!!
    April 6th, 2010 at 06:21am
  • I'm glad Kelly is helping Ben out with breakfast, I'm not too sure of his cooking abilities. He's never cooked in previous chapters as far as I can remember. So Sage has a few more surprises for Ben? I have a hunch as to what some of it might be but I'm not going to make any assumptions. I can't wait to find out what they are. As for another word for joint; I have no clue. I really like the name Clay. I actually used to have a crush on a gay guy named Clay. I always found it funny that he's into art, more studio art than ceramics, but still. Still loving this story! Hope to be reading more soon! <3
    April 6th, 2010 at 01:35am
  • another word for cigarette is fag...so fag might work for joint too. idk, i'm very sheltered too
    April 6th, 2010 at 12:36am
  • awh. this is adorable, still
    April 5th, 2010 at 10:38pm
  • Joint; Blunt; Dube (Doo-be); Roach (Roach is a smaller joint, one that's been almost completely smoked). And some people call them rolls, but it's a newer name.

    Yeah, totally. I'm uh..innocent. Totally.
    So I love this so much :)
    April 5th, 2010 at 10:36pm
  • I loved this, and another word or words for "joint" is "roach" or "blunt" well those have what I've heard
    April 5th, 2010 at 10:17pm
  • umm...for the question of sex...the answer is YES!!!!. not only because im a fan girl at heart but i think the relationship between Ben and Sage (btw love that name) is at that point. AND I LOVE THE DIFFERENT LANGUAGES THING SO ROMANTIC!!! (im going to use that at some point in time)
    April 4th, 2010 at 12:32am
  • Whoops! I meant to say 'Love this story more with each new chapter.' I kind of skipped a few words there didn't I.
    March 30th, 2010 at 07:34am
  • I just reread this, all 73 chapters, and I'm just more impressed and in love with this story. Going back to the beginning and seeing just how much these two have grown as individuals and together is amazing. I didn't really notice it before because it was portrayed in such a way that it was just natural like in real life. You know how the people your with the most you don't really notice how they change? Not till they're around someone they haven't seen in a wile and that person points out the differences and then you realize them for yourself. That's what going back and rereading this was like. It's incredible how well developed your characters are and how realistic their growth is. Any way, I just had to say all that. Also I thought more about the sex thing. I don't see them doing it because it isn't the sort of thing that they have done in the past. I mean that that sort of thing hasn't been what you write about with them. Yah, they've had their little moments here and there but they really haven't done much more than make out and give the occasional hickey. Also they seem the type to wait for the perfect moment to do anything spatial or important and this would definitely be one of those occasions. They always go the extra mile for each other. That's just my opinion, and I'm sure that if you do decide to have them do it that you will find just the right way for it to happen. Love more with each new chapter. Hope to be reading more soon! <3 (wow, that's a really long comment!)
    March 30th, 2010 at 07:30am
  • SEX!!!!
    Definatly sex
    or lovemaking
    March 29th, 2010 at 02:22am
  • sexy time is up to you :) but i would enjoy it...lol
    March 29th, 2010 at 01:04am
  • I loved it, so sweet..and yes sex is always a good thing, I can't wait to read more of this(the way Sage said "I Love You" to Ben was just beautiful)
    March 29th, 2010 at 12:47am
  • Oh shit! The whole time I've been reading it,
    I realised one of the characters was portrayed by Ash Stymest!
    My favourite boy. Haha.

    Beautiful job on the last chapters, and especially the whole story!
    Sex? I don't think it would be weird. We all love it in slash. :)
    March 29th, 2010 at 12:35am
  • I loved the chapter! The path of "I love you"s was so adorable!
    And Sex? Well slash stories almost always has boyxboy scenes and I defiantly wont be upset if you put it in there ;) But I think the story could thrive either way! And If you do put a sex scene in it I don't think it should be a heated, lust filled, screaming orgy (Wow nice choice of words xD) I think it should be more passionate and loving!

    Anyways, great job on the last 3 chapters!!! I loveddddd them!
    March 28th, 2010 at 10:08pm
  • Oohhhh, I've just got up to date on this and I love it just as much as I did before. My lack of comments = my lack of internet. Sorry about that...

    That last chapter there was absloutley amazing, it truly was. More soon? No pressure. ^_^

    :) ♥
    March 28th, 2010 at 08:33pm
  • I love your story. :D
    as for the sex thing..
    I don't think it would be out of place if you put it in there. I mean, they've been together how long?! xD
    March 28th, 2010 at 06:06pm
  • Sex? Totally.
    I mean, they've waited long enough, give them a break goddamn! hahah :)
    March 28th, 2010 at 02:10pm