Just Praying to a God That I Don't Believe In - Comments

  • Miyral

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    Wow, I didn't have to wait very long. Having the path of I love you's in different languages was very cute. It was just the sort of unique thing that those two do for each other. Dam, now I'm hungry and that sounds like a really tasty meal. I don't know. I can't really see them going as far as having sex, at least not yet. I don't think it's really needed for this story. It's done plenty well without for the past 73 chapters, but if you and other readers want it and you can find a way to make it work then go for it. Hope to be reading more soon! <3
    March 28th, 2010 at 07:26am
  • Miyral

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    I'm not surprised that Ben figured out that Sage was planing something so easily. Hmm, a tattoo. I wander what Ben will chose for his tattoo. Can't wait to see what Sage has been planning all day. Hope to find out soon! <3
    March 28th, 2010 at 07:02am
  • MiniMCR

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    it depends on whether something important happens in ben's day. i think having a chapter in ben'd pov will be cool, tho. so update SOON!
    March 27th, 2010 at 03:25pm
  • Absinthx

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    Sage's house.
    Writing about his entire day might stretch it a little too much with irrelevant info, only do the important parts
    Anywho, good update :) Can't wait to see what happens next
    March 27th, 2010 at 01:20pm
  • boyking

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    I think you should write his whole day.
    I like Ben, so his POV should be great. (:

    Can't wait for the next chapter!
    March 27th, 2010 at 06:16am
  • Miyral

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    Hmm... I don't know about the whole day, you don't want the chapter to get tedious, but maybe a few interesting or important parts of his day such as when Sage called him. Can't wit to see what Sage has planed for Ben. Hope to find out soon! <3
    March 27th, 2010 at 04:52am
  • Chace

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    i say sage's house
    March 27th, 2010 at 03:59am
  • ashtray girl.

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    whole day Cute
    March 27th, 2010 at 03:15am
  • Pnkrckprncss

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    The whole day. Def.
    March 27th, 2010 at 02:56am
  • MiniMCR

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    UPDATE! this is awesome...and ben and sage are soooooo cute
    March 18th, 2010 at 11:14pm
  • Serena.

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    This story is great!
    I read all the chapters in 2 days & cant wait for the next one!
    March 18th, 2010 at 01:12am
  • miss monti

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    I love the new layout, it's fabulous!
    Cute update, I love Ben and Sage.
    They're so cute it makes me squeal
    March 17th, 2010 at 04:19am
  • Miyral

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    That's cool that he's a soccer player. He really should try out for the team if the coach has been asking for Ben and he's better than Ben. I loved that moment where he was putting himself down about his soccer playing and rephrased what he was saying when it was pointed out. It was a small part but it showed how much he's really trying to think better of himself. Hope there's more soon! <3
    March 15th, 2010 at 06:53pm
  • AshlynnLyrix

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    glad things are back to normal
    March 15th, 2010 at 03:20am
  • ashtray girl.

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    awh. they're adorable. In Love
    March 15th, 2010 at 02:49am
  • A.Lifeless.Rose.

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    Option 1
    March 14th, 2010 at 01:42pm
  • Ms.Hopeless_Savage

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    dont change the layout the one you got up is already the best choice
    March 14th, 2010 at 10:50am
  • dnciz4evr

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    Oh gosh. I looooooved it!! ((:
    The puppy is adorable, Ben is amazing, and Sage is just awesome.

    I like option 2 for the layout btw, if you haven't picked already.
    March 12th, 2010 at 11:16pm
  • PresleyRenee

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    Option One is my favorite :D
    And I love the chapter! :)
    March 11th, 2010 at 06:54am
  • adoration

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    three.

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    And yay, happiness.
    March 9th, 2010 at 04:12am