Mia's Apples - Comments

Wow, That was great! I looked at the rest of the stories in the contest and yours is the best!

So, this was one of the few entries that actually impressed me not only in how you interpreted and used the word, but also in your story content. :cute:

I also loved that you covered the weapons with apples, now I'm probably going too far in my analysis, but I liked that a lot. It made me think of various stories where apples are used to cover up or symbolize nefarious things. Of course I don't view what the girl did as 'bad' or even 'incorrect' but it was of course illegal, and she knew exactly what she was doing. You probably didn't intend this piece to be a complete attack on certain societies, but yeah sorry, my thoughts carry themselves too far often.

Thank you again for entering and writing this awesome and adorable piece, and congratulations on winning first place for the long entries

If you could just PM me the 7 stories you'd like comments on that'd be great :arms:

Really good - continue!