Super Avenged: Only Human - Comments

awww i'll always be your #1 fan and i think that you should contine this but instead of Matt., Brian, Jimmy, Johnny, and Zacky being the super heros, their kids should do it :)

That was without doubt the perfect ending to this. I knew those kids were going to be a handful, but then with a superhero for a dad it was inevitable. I've loved this story and it's prequel, they've both kept me amused, had me on the brink of tears a few times and made me smile all in equal proportions, and that only proves to me what a wonderful author you are if you can stir those emotions in me. I look forward to the new story you have planned and any others that are hiding away just waiting to be written xxx

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I think you should do a story like this but with Brian Haner Jr.

Like a 2nd girl doesn't fall for the charm and he falls for her or something! That would be cool! But you don't have too. Just a suggestion

I think you should do a whole series, doing each of the guys.
that would be hella bomb.
sorry my comments were really cruddy, I'm just not a commenter, and lately I haven't been able to function well enough to form a coherent thought, but I totally loved this story. It reminded me of a comic book. Thanks for writing even though you didn't get a lot of comments
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I think you should do a story like this but with Brian Haner Jr.

Like a 2nd girl doesn't fall for the charm and he falls for her or something! That would be cool! But you don't have too. Just a suggestion

Ok, first update had me trying very hard not to cry, and yet it was such a touching image of the pair of them finally letting go of how they'd felt during that time that Miya was gone. And for Miya to now finally realise just how much Jimmy really does love her...so sweet.
And the second update....the thought of baby Sullivan's running riot doesn't even bare thinking about...poor Miya's going to have her hands full :)
Loved it hun, but then you knew I would ;) xx

I loved how sweet the hospital seen! keep on writing pleaz. I rememeber readin ur stuff on quizilla. Ur gettin so good!!!!

I agree with the above comment, Zacky being able to tap into all of Jimmy's thoughts, including the ones he didn't want to did make me chuckle. Just as well it's not Brian with that talent...Idon't think he would've been quite so eager to stop ;)
I love how Jimmy and Miya are so in tune with each other that he knew what her thoughts on the therapist idea would be. She has Jimmy and that really is all she needs to help her get through her recovery from such an ordeal.
Yet another wonderful update that tugged on my heartstrings a little with the Mia and Jimmy cuteness:) xx

awww, the hospital scene was really sweet.
and I loved how Zacky had to witness Jimmy's dirty thoughts.

Thank god for that! I had a feeling the rest of the guys would show up, there was no way you'd let Miya die. The Mastermind did all of that out of his hatred towards Jimmy being a hero? Strange man indeed.

Loved it :) xx

YAY!
Miya was saved!

Aud! I am going to murder u! chapter 22 made me cry! it was so sad!

DAMN iT JIMMAY!
YOU IS TAKEN TOO DAMN LONG TO SAVE HER!

Oh good grief, I had to take my glasses off because my eyes were misting up and I couldn't read a damn thing! That was beautiful even though it was tinged with such great sadness. The love between them is so evident, and yet I love how Miya is trying to help Jimmy get through it by letting him know what he should do.
Jimmy has to get to her now, just so they can have that second honeymoon.

Absolutely loved it xx

I'm loving how this is in Jimmy's viewpoint, the sadness and despair he's feeling over Miya comes over so well that it actually makes me want to give him a big old hug and tell him it'll be alright.
A little worried as to what the midnight rendezvous could bring though, but looking forward to the next chapter anyway :)

Brilliant update hun xx

So there I was happily reading away and thinking to myself 'the entire story's been a dream'...until I read the words 'Are you broken yet Mr.Sullivan?', and that's when I realised you had me fooled!
Poor Jimmy, he's going through sheer hell not being able to do anything. I just hope that one small clue comes their way soon so that they may stand a chance of finding Miya.

Absolutely loved it hun :) xx

Oh, I'm luffing these chapters! Amazing =) And ohGOD, not chapters to make me cry! Ugh, I'm so preparing myself

awwww,
you'll find her jimmy.
we'll beat that god damn bad guys ass!

As sad as this may sound, that is by far my favourite chapter of this story. Miya's strength despite the situation she's in, the way Jimmy seems so lost without her, it all shone through in this update so well. I actually can't think of anything else to say right now.

Wonderful :) xx

Oh lord, now things have really upped a gear. I wonder where the hell she could be? They need to find her :( Poor Jimmy's going to be lost without Miya.

Brillaint updates hun, sorry I've been slack in commenting xx

lol, guess I'll just comment again.
haha. yay jimmay pov!